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ferretchucker
05-13-2008, 06:59 AM
Well, I have spoken to Massacre Man, and he's given me the go ahead for another one of these. I have a story planned out. Anybody wanna be involved?
I will definitely be including:

Massacre Man
Neverending
_____V_____
Myself
Gorephobia

This is going to be a direct sequel to part 7ero as part 8 wasn't completed.

If you didn't read part 7ero, then here it is.

http://www.horror.com/forum/showthread.php?t=31992

hammerfan
05-13-2008, 07:04 AM
Me, me, me!!!!!!!!

ferretchucker
05-13-2008, 07:20 AM
Okay then. You and little paramount apple.

Despare
05-13-2008, 07:34 AM
Me too

Dante'sInferno
05-13-2008, 07:43 AM
Me too?I know i died....but i could appear in a flashback or something...

ferretchucker
05-13-2008, 07:51 AM
I forgot, which one did you die in? I mean, other than V, Massacre Man, Hammer and gore, I don't really mind, whether you were in one before or not. Neverending's in it because he's been in all of them so far and I wanna keep that up.

Dante'sInferno
05-13-2008, 08:04 AM
I forgot, which one did you die in? I mean, other than V, Massacre Man, Hammer and gore, I don't really mind, whether you were in one before or not. Neverending's in it because he's been in all of them so far and I wanna keep that up.I think i died in 2.But,cool,ill be in this one.:)

ferretchucker
05-13-2008, 08:45 AM
great. You're all in.

Papillon Noir
05-13-2008, 09:33 AM
Can I be in it? :)

ferretchucker
05-13-2008, 10:19 AM
Sure. Infact, I've got what I need for the start now.


Fade out from a black screen. It's night time, and rain is pouring down. A lone medium sized building with a sign "ScissorCorp." outside can be seen. Cut to the inside of it. Two men dressed as security guards are walking down the corridor, turning off lights and locking doors.

Despare: Hey, I'm goin' for a whizz.

Other guard: Sure. I'll lock up the rest.

Despare walks off. The other guard goes up to a door labelled "Outgoing Mail" and opens it. The camera is on his face,w hich turns to one of sheer shock.

Guard: Oh my god! Ahhhhhhh!

Sounds of squelching can be heard, then a roar. The camera goes to Depspare, just about to walk into the toilet. Gunshots can be heard. He turns and runs down the hall.

Despare: Hold on! I'm coming!

He draws his gun and turns a corner. He stops in his tracks. In front of him is the open door, the leg of the other guard sticking out of it and a trail of green slime leading to a smashed window.

Despare: Fuck!

He walks over to the door and looks inside.

Despare: Holy shit!

The body of the other guard, covered in greenish slime and melting can be seen. Beside it is an open envelope. He picks it up. It reads,

"Mr. M. Man
13 Fern Drive
Shady Side
Illinois"

Despare drops the envelope, pulls out his radio and speaks into it.

Despare: Hello. Sir. I need to speak directly to Mr. Gorephobia. It's incredibly important. It's about...Massacreman. And operation Zero point two.

He looks back down at the body of the other guard. The camera zooms in on the melting face, and the opening credits role.

hammerfan
05-13-2008, 10:21 AM
Very nice start!

ferretchucker
05-13-2008, 10:23 AM
thanks. I don't exactly know where i'm taking this though.

massacre man
05-13-2008, 12:12 PM
Massacreman.

That's me!

ferretchucker
05-13-2008, 12:43 PM
No, you got it all wrong. I meant the other Massacre Man.

GorePhobia
05-13-2008, 11:17 PM
Yay!

I love being involved with these awesome movies!

missmacabre
05-14-2008, 11:16 AM
I was alive in the end of part 7ero right?

ferretchucker
05-14-2008, 11:55 AM
Yeh. As I remember, you, Massacre Man and Gore survived.

ferretchucker
05-14-2008, 12:42 PM
The camera fades into a room. It slowly pans around, showing pizza boxes, it moves forward and a cheque to Massacre Man for $2000 is shown. The camera then moves forward to show Massacre Man on his computer. It shows him for about 20 seconds, watching a video. The phone next to him rings.

Massacre Man: Hello?...Yeh...Er, sure. I'll leave now.

Illdojo and Rod appear.

Rod: Who was that? Was it important? I bet it was important.

Massacre Man: Can't you guys just leave me alone?

Illdojo: Well what kind of friends would we be then? Anyway, you need to want us gone. We're just figments on your imagination.

Massacre Man: No, you're right, I want a couple of dead guys following me around all the time. Fuck, that sound nice!

Rod: That's the spirit!

Massacre Man: I need to go. Don't eat any of the cheese dip. Wait a minute- you're de-. Fuck. Just...nevermind.

He goes out the door and gets into his De Lorean, then drives away. The camera shows him pulling up to the side of a park. He gets out of the car, and walks in. He sits down on a bench, next to a girl.

Miss Macabre: Hey...

Massacre Man: Hey. So. How're you?

Miss Macabre: I'm, well, er-

Massacre Man: Lets cut the crap. I know what you called me here to talk about. How've you been coping?

Miss Macabre: Bad. I mean. My school work has suffered, I just. I just sit in my room now. Doing nothing. It's just. All that death. All that suffering.
All that pain. How do you cope with it? How can you manage? Just the thought of never seeing them again. Never seeing your friends again.

Massacre Man: You're lucky. My dead friends won't leave me alone.

Miss Macabre: What?

Massacre Man: Nevermind. Anyway. The short answer is, I haven't really coped. I barely had time to cope. So much happened in the space of about a week. I saw my friends die, I saw people I didn't know die. I even killed.

Miss Macabre: But what about since that night. These last six months. How've they been?

Massacre Man: Well, I think about it sometimes, but when I do, I just get my mind the fuck away from the subject and either go to work, or watch television. The money from ScissorCorp. helped-

Miss Macabre: What money? You mean that guy from the cave?!

Massacre Man: Yeh. Gorephobia. They've been sending me cheques every month. Well, at first they didn't. And a couple of cars came pretty close to hitting me, but I think they realised I wasn't going to blab.

Miss Macabre: They think I'm dead.

Massacre Man: What?

Miss Macabre: That guy. Gorephobia. He pushed me off the rockface. I was so scared I crawled into a ditch and hid there. I saw you get out but didn't know if I could trust you- Wait a minute. You were missing a leg.

Massacre Man pulls up his trouser leg, showing an artificial leg.

Massacre Man: State of the art. Got it with the money from ScissorCorp.

Miss Macabre: Don't you need to tell the car guys that you have that to be able to drive.

Massacre Man: Yeh. I'd also need to get a license. Look, you're obviously finding this hard, and I know it's only been six months. Just try to find something that can take your mind off it.

Miss Macabre: Like that?

She points half heartedly to a sheet of orange paper stuck to a street lamp. It reads:

Circus in Town! All Week! Don't miss it!

Massacre Man: Yeh. That looks kinda fun. If you go, I might see you there. But anyway, my shift starts in a couple of hours.

Miss Macabre: Why do you need to work with the cheques you're getting?

Massacre Man: Coz daytime television sucks. Cya later. My boss'll probably have a fucking fit if I'm late.

Miss Macabre: Wait. You and I both know what that company, ScissorCorp. are like. I still think you should be careful. Gorephobia killed me for being a witness. They might need you for something else.

He gets up and leave. Miss Macabre looks at the notive again, then walks off. In the bushes behind the bench, something russels, then a gurgling-growling sound is made.

Psycom5k
05-14-2008, 02:41 PM
I'd like to be in this too, if its not too late.

GorePhobia
05-14-2008, 04:29 PM
Nice stuff Ferret I am loving it so far.

Disease
05-14-2008, 05:33 PM
Can I be someone who kills you in this one?

ferretchucker
05-15-2008, 06:22 AM
Well, I do plan on dying in this one, and if you want in you can. However, I can't promise anything about you killing me.


Oh, and yeh psycom, you can be in it.

Psycom5k
05-15-2008, 09:50 AM
Sweet, I can be the sleezeball that gets alot of tail and nobody really likes him during the whole movie, but at the end he redeems himself and saves people, either by narrowly escaping losing his life, or actually dying, the hes gonna go go heaven and get some angel booty.... yeah, angel booty...

Papillon Noir
05-15-2008, 10:01 AM
Great job Ferret :)

Now when do I show up? :D

ferretchucker
05-15-2008, 01:05 PM
Patience my friends...patience.

Well, anyway, I'm kinda tired (and I took a few of my dad's beers so I wanna draw as little attentiopn to myself as possible) because it's getting kinda late here in england. So, I'll post another part when I get home from school.

ferretchucker
05-16-2008, 01:52 PM
The camera shows an empty, desolate road. A snail appears and begins going across the road. It is nearly at the other side when a car speeds past, crushing it. The camera goes up to show the inside of the car. A woman in a wedding dress and a guy in a tux are in there.

Papillon Noir: Where now?!

Psycom: Anywhere! We got 50k in the back seat, you and your husbands wedding rings, a great car and the open road! Better still, he's so gullible, he thinks you're going back!

They lean over and kiss each other. The music is blaring. As he leans over, the car goes to the side and off the road, onto the dirt. He quickly turns the wheel back so they're back on the road. He shouts out like a wolf.

Psycom: Fuck I have so much adrenaline! It worked so well this time!

Papillon: Yeh! 3rd time lucky! Meet 'em, greet 'em, marry 'em, and leave 'em!

Psycom: Fuck I love this song!

He turns up the radio and "Slow Ride!" plays really loud. The two shout out and kiss each other again. The camera goes to an outside silver ferrari speeds off. The camera goes up to a sign saying "Welcome to Shady Side".

Cut to a shot of a road in Shady Side. Massacre Man's De Lorean is driving down the road. He pulls up at some lights, about to turn left. The Ferrari speeds along infront of him, going down the road he then turns into. He follows it. The car turns into his street, then pulls up to house just oppsite his, now a Bed and Breakfast. Papillon and Psycom get out of the car and walk up to the door. They ring the bell. Dante opens the door.

Dante: You guys lookin' for a place to stay?

Papillon: Yeh. How much.

She gets out a ciggarette and starts smoking it. As she pulls it away from her mouth, her and psycom make out. He breathes out some smoke when they're done.

Dante: $5 a night for the two of you. It's small but each room has an en suite and it's a cooked breakfast in the morning. Doors lock at 11:00pm.

Psycom: Fine. It'll do.

Massacre Man gets out of his car, where he'd been sitting, and goes over to them.

Massacre Man: You guys mind being more careful with the fucking car. Kids live round here and the speed you went round this corner, you could have killed one without fucking knowing.

Papillon Noir takes a puff on the ciggarette and blows the smoke out into his face.

Papillon: Er, sorry. Didn't realise you were my dad.

Psycom: Yeh. Fuck you, bastard and leave my babe alone.

Massacre Man: You two are fucking rejects. Fuck you, but if you don't slow down, I'll make you.

Psycom gets up in Massacre Man's face and spits. Massacre Man pucnches him. Psycom gets up, about to retaliate when Dante speaks up.

Dante: Massacre Man, get back ni your fucking house! You, whatever your name is, if you fight back, at all, your stuff'll be thrown out the window for the neighborhood kids to take.

Psycom: Fine. But I'm watching your man, and mark my words, I will Fuck. You. Up. Seeya later, asswipe.

Massacre Man walks back inside his house and Papillon, Dante and Psycom begin unloading the suitcases from the car.

massacre man
05-16-2008, 01:55 PM
Yeah! Fuck with me!

Rayne
05-16-2008, 01:55 PM
How about a new character?...Her name is Rayne...They aren't really sure where she comes from, and no one knows much about her...but...Eventually it's discovered that she's actually... BLOODRAYNE! OMG:eek: :eek: :eek:


HaHaHa...I was just having fun with that :p

Dante'sInferno
05-16-2008, 01:57 PM
That was awsome ferretchucker!

Doc Faustus
05-16-2008, 01:58 PM
Good stuff. Can I be Todd Faustus, the incompetent grandson of the Doc Faustus from HDC the movie 1?

Rayne
05-16-2008, 02:01 PM
OH...Forgot to mention (cuz I was being silly)

This is GREAT so far :)

ferretchucker
05-16-2008, 02:09 PM
Thanks guys. Yeh doc, you can be in it. And you too rayne.

Psycom5k
05-18-2008, 07:16 AM
Sweet I get to be a douchebag! Anyways Massacre, you're lucky Dante stepped in otherwise I would have Fucked. You. Up! :p

Nice work so far Sir Chucker of Ferrets.

ferretchucker
05-18-2008, 07:54 AM
The screen is black. It fades into a helicopter. There are several people in it, one of them is Despare. He looks down at the ground, anout 500 feet below. They slowly go down and land on the roof of a large sky scraper. He gets out and is greeted by several men in suits.

Man 1: This way please.

They go through a door, down some stairs and walk into a mordern looking room. There's a desk in the middle of the room. The chair is facing away. It turns around and there's a man in it. Gorephobia. He is wearing sun glasses and has a suit on. Where one of his hands was, there's now a hook, and the other has small, finger shaped pieces of metal in the place of his fingers. He has plenty of scars.

Gorephobia: Hello again Despare. I haven't seen you in-

Despare: Three years. When you demoted me.

Gorephobia: Ahh yes. I remember now. You were caught passing information.

Despare: Sir, I was framed. But shall we not get into that. I have some very important info.

Gorephobia: Yes, yes. About operation 0.2. I was told Massacre Man was involved.

Despare: Well, yes. In the Echo-5 base, several of my coleagues were found dead. They had the typical-

Gorephobia: Wait. Guards. Thankyou, but you must leave.

Man 2: Are you sure sir?

Gorephobia: Yes. I have the panic button. Now leave.

The two men leave. Despare continues.

Despare Sir, they were melted and the trail was there. When we worked on 0.2, when I was a guard here, they were it's traits. The living acid.

Gorephobia: Despare. Do you remember how many people knew about 0.2?

Despare: There were seven of us.

Gorephobia: Yes. Ten. The scientists who made the blunder were killed. That took it down to 4. Bwind, the man responsible for finding the specimen died before my very eyes, just six months ago. That leaves you, me, the other guard being the only ones who know there was a 0.2. The prison builder, Geddy, died in a plug socket related accident.

Despare: Wait a moment, you didn't tell anybody else it even existed? But over the radio, I told-

Gorephobia: Taken care of. He will be found dead in his bathroom after slipping on a wet floor when his cleaner arrives later today.

Despare: You're killing him for knowing that there was an experiment number?!

Gorephobia: Yes. I was open about operation zero and it got me nothing but grief. When it was discovered he had gone missing, I nearly had a mutiny. If the company discover 0.2, let alone that it escaped, the entire
company will turn against me. The only reason you and the other guard are still alive is because I knew I might need you.

Despare: How did you know we wouldn't mention it to anybody?

Gorephobia: I didn't. I had to take the risk with you two. For if the situation arose, like it has, I knew you two were the only ones who knew how to kill it. You refused to tell even me.

Despare: The way of killing this thing could be used as a weapon to destory entire nations. I couldn't take the risk of you knowing. Maybe if you had kept the scientists alive they could have told you.

Gorephobia: This is not important. Not now. What was this info you had?

Despare: Sir. When I found the body of my colleague, next to it was a letter ready to be sent.

Gorephobia: To Massacre Man? I was told he was involved.

Despare: I don't know why it wants Massacre Man. Maybe it chose him at random, maybe not. But it has something to do with this company. Through
Massacre Man, it could find it's way back here. Once it came here, it could kill you, kill anybody in the company, Kill anybody in the world. When it escaped, it did nothing. But we already discovered it's lust for revenge. With half the bio weapons here, it could destroy the world if it wanted to. I knew we should have left it here. In the cage it was in here, it wouldn't have escaped. But when you moved it to mexico, the confines weren-

Gorephobia: Stop. I've made up my mind. Massacre Man must die, and so must 0.2. Get the other old guard. ou must go to Shady Side and kill wait for 0.2 to show up. When it does, kill them both.

Despare: Yes Sir. If it means the good of the world, I will kill the innocent.

Gorephobia: Good. I want it done by tommorow night. Five million dollars when you bring me their bodies. Fisher, Samuels, come back in here.

The two guards enter.

Gorephobia: There's a promotion in this. Do either of you remember what experiment I mentioned before you left.

Both say 0.2 at around the same time.

Gorephobia: Shame...you two were good guards.

He presses a button on the desk. A thick sheet of glass slides down infront of them, separating them from Gore and Despare. One of them tries the door but it's locked. The other shoot the glass, but the bullet simply stops in it's tracks as it hits the glass. Several of the roof tiles slide back and water begins quickly flooding in. Eventually, when it's about three quaters of the way up, two things drop into the water with a slight splash. They're then followed by many more splashes. Soon, the new water tank is filled about fifty piranhas.

Gorephobia: That water will be there for a while. Take the other door.

He presses another button and a door to the side swings open. With a look back at the now drowning guards being eyes hungrily by the killer fish, Despare leaves.

crabapple
05-18-2008, 08:22 AM
Looks like another crazy movie!

ferretchucker
05-18-2008, 08:24 AM
Yeh. And little paramount Apple is sure to appear to crazy things up some more!

Papillon Noir
05-19-2008, 05:52 AM
Hahaha! I love my character Ferret! This is awesome!

Psycom5k
05-19-2008, 11:09 AM
Hahaha! I love my character Ferret! This is awesome!

You just love your character cause shes allover mine. Cmon admit it, you want me.

Papillon Noir
05-19-2008, 11:20 AM
You just love your character cause shes allover mine. Cmon admit it, you want me.

Oh yeah, baby. You know it! :p

Now c'mon, we got people to con, money to spend, asses to kick and I'm almost out of cigarettes! :D

Psycom5k
05-19-2008, 11:24 AM
Oh yeah, baby. You know it! :p

Now c'mon, we got people to con, money to spend, asses to kick and I'm almost out of cigarettes! :D

Lets just rob a liquor store. Free cigarettes. :)

hammerfan
05-19-2008, 11:36 AM
I'm still lovin' it, FC!

Papillon Noir
05-19-2008, 11:40 AM
Lets just rob a liquor store. Free cigarettes. :)

And free booze! :D

ferretchucker
05-19-2008, 12:44 PM
Massacre Man is in his lounge. The TV's on. Suddenly, Roderick Usher and Illdojo appear next to him.

Massacre Man: Fuck! Why the hell are you still here? Move on! What's your unfinished business?!

Illdojo: We're not ghosts. We're part of your brain. Part of your subconcious mind, trying to give you a message.

Massacre Man: What message?

Rod: Fuck knows!

Massacre Man: Screw it! I'm goin' to the carnival.

Rod: Cool. Win me a DVD.

Massacre Man gets up, ready to go. A bang is heard upstairs. He looks up. He walks over to the corner of the room and picks up a candle stick and makes his way to the stairs.

Illdojo: This shit just got real.

Massacre Man: Shut the fuck up.

He goes up the stairs. Another bang. As his foot goes up another stair, it creaks. All noise goes silent. He races up the steps and goes straight into the bathroom. Nothing in there. A loud smash and he runs to the bedroom. The window's smashed. He looks out. Nothing there. He turns around and walks out. As he leaves the room, a green, bubbling piece of slime drops to the floor, and a small gurgling sound is made.

Massacre Man: This house is fucking haunted. But fuck it, the carnival's waiting.

He goes down the stairs and walks out. He's about to get in the de lorean when he looks forward. Out of nowhere a fist flies at him. He's knocked to the floor. He looks up and Psycom's there.

Psycom: I fucking told you! You piece of shit!

Massacre Man: Hey, maybe you should be focused on those kids messin' up your car!

Psycom turns around gicing Massacre Man a chance to kick him to the ground. Massacre Man gets up, kicks him again and gets into the de lorean. Psycom gets up.

Psycom: You're a fucking pussy! You hear me?! A fucking pussy! Run away. I'll get you fucking back for this!

He picks up a stone about the size of a golf ball and throws it into an upstairs window, making a hole in it. After a second or two, the stone gets thrown back. It hits Psycom on the forhead, knocking him out.

illdojo
05-19-2008, 12:51 PM
A little cameo from Mass, Rod and I.......nice touch, youngster. :cool:

hammerfan
05-19-2008, 12:54 PM
Nice!!!!!!

ferretchucker
05-21-2008, 12:13 PM
The camera shows a small carnival. There's a small ferris wheel, a small roller coaster and the other usual carnival attractions. Miss Macabre is walks along a road until she reaches it. She's wearing gothic clothes and her hair is covering her face. She passes a group of girls about her age.

Girl #1: Hey freak, Nice clothes. But I think you're too late to return them. The zoo closed about an hour ago.

Girl #2: Yeh. You're shirt really brings out your eyes. Shame. Would have been a nice shirt.

Miss Macabre: Shut up.

The group of girls walk forward so they're in front of her.

Girl #2: What was that?

Miss Macabre: Meekly I said shutup. You're only acting like that because you've slept with half the town.

Girl #2: What? At least I've slept with someone at all.

Miss Macabre: Stop being such a bitch.

The girl slaps Miss Macabre. Miss Macabre Tries to slap her back but some of the other, larger girl step infront and her hand seems to bounce off them.

Miss Macabre: Shit...

One of the larger girls punches her. She turns around and starts running but trips over. She falls to the floor. The large girls walk over and start kicking her. The other girls are laughing.

Miss Macabre: Help!

Nobody comes to her aid. Suddenly, Massacre Man's De Lorean speeds down the road. It pulls up beside her. Massacre Man gets out.

Massacre Man: Leave her alone.

Large girl #1: Or what?

Girl #2: Yeh. What are you gonna do. You're just that loser who used to work in K-Mart.

Massacre Man: I said, get the fuck off her.

Girl #2: And she said, or what?

Massacre Man: Are you...are you Jenna? Jenna26?

Girl #2: How do you know my name?

Massacre Man: You're my old friend Alky from K-Marts daughter. That's how you knew me.

Girl #2: No I'm not.

Massacre Man: Yeh you are. You're the little bitch who nearly bled himdry of cash. I have him on speed dial. He'll probably find it funny. Let me just call him. He'll get the joke.

He gets out his Cell Phone.

Jenna: Girls...Scatter!

All the girls run away. Massacre Man pulls Miss Macabre to her feet.

Miss macabre: Thanks.

Massacre Man: No problem. Good to see you've come to the carnival. Those whores wont bother you for a while.

Miss Macabre: You wanna go on the roller coaster?

Massacre Man: Sure. I don't have anything else to do here.

The shot goes to infront of them, as they're walking forward, Jenna appears in the back ground. She walks out of a small alley way, and crouches beside a hedge infront of a house, the hedge hides the garden. As the two of them walk forward, Jenna slowly creeps out, still watching them. All of a sudden, a huge tentacle like things shoots out over the hedge and down, grabs her, and pulls her back into the garden. The hedge rustles but what's happening can't be seen.

hammerfan
05-21-2008, 12:24 PM
Excellent!

ferretchucker
05-29-2008, 09:02 AM
Sorry this is quite late and short. I'll try to do another longer one soon.


The camera is following a dark car. It's driving very fast along a dirt track. Water splashes as it goes through puddles. Despare is inside the car. He looks at the clock in the car. 8:35pm. He slows down and gets out. He walks forward to infront or a large gate, which is several hundred yards infront of a large mansion, and a beeping sound is heard. Despare looks sideways to see a pole of metal stuck into the ground, with a small piece of glass over it, like a very small camera lense.

Despare: Oh shit.

He looks forward and sees the gate infront opening, then turns around. The road is too far to try to run. The sound of sliding metal is heared, then loud barking, coming closer. He turns to the camera.

Despare: Hey listen, it's me! Despare! I'm here about 0.2! It's loose!

Nothing happens. The dogs get closer.

Despare: Only me and you can kill it! Jesus Christ let me in or so help me god I will shoot my way in!

He runs to the car, opens the door and pulls out an uzi. As the dogs get ever nearer, and Despare is about to shoot, a voice sounds.

Voice: There won't be any need for that.

The gates close, trapping the dogs. A large manhole cover on the floor open up, revealing some steps going down. Despare walks down them. There's another large, metal door, with a peephole. He looks through it. Suddenly, a bright light shines back at him. After a few seconds, the wall beside him opens. He walks forward, into a large, room, designed to look like the front hall of a mansion. A man walks forward.

Man: Hello old friend.

Despare: Hello Disease. Are you ready?

Disease: Sure. Lets kill that son of a bitch like we should have done in the first place.

Papillon Noir
06-11-2008, 05:39 AM
Hey Ferret, is there anymore to this story?

ferretchucker
06-16-2008, 09:54 AM
The camera fades into the carnival. Massacre Man and Miss Macabre are walking around together.

Massacre Man: Okay, so that's every ride. You feeling better yet?

Miss Macabre: Dunno. But I definetely don't feel ready to go home. I just want to let my hair down.

Massacre Man: How old are you?

He's looking in the other direction.

Miss Macabre: 16.

Massacre Man: Good. That mean's you're old enough to walk around without an adult.

Without another word he walks off. Miss Macabre watches him. He goes over to a bar.

Massacre Man: Was it my imagination-

A woman's infront of him. She has short dark hair and looks about 25. She's holding a glass of wine.

Woman: Yes. I was waving at you. My name's Rayne.

Massacre Man: Oh, well. Rayne. Can I get you another drink?

Rayne: No. But you know what. My apartment was just vandalised. I need a place to stay. Can I stay at your place for a while?

Massacre Man: Sure.

Miss Macabre walks by. She goes into the bar. Massacre Man doesn't notice she's there.

Rayne: That girl you were with? She isn't, you know, you're girlfriend right?

Massacre Man: What? Nah. She's just some annoying kid who won't leave me alone.

Rayne: Good. Here. Have some wine.

Massacre Man takes a sip of the red wine, but then as he's giving it back, drops a bit on Rayne.

Massacre Man: Fuck. Sorry. Great, now you'll have to take it off.

She smiles up at him.

Rayne: Slow down. You know, I'll just go and wash it off. It should wipe.

She goes into the restroom. Miss Macabre is in a stall there. She here's some voices.

Rayne: Hey. Have you got any lipstick I can borrow?

A drunk sounding voice replies.

Woman: No. I think...you can glet. your own.

Rayne: I think you dropped something.

Woman: No I didn't.

Suddenly, screams are heard and a loud, slurping, growling sound is made. Miss Macabre looks under the stall just in time to see Rayne leave the room. She makes a quiet scream and sits there in shock. Then she gets up and runs out. She runs outside of the bar and sees Masacre Man and Rayne far up the sidewalk going towards his car. They get in and before Miss Macabre can say anything, drive off. She shouts out but the car doesn't stop. She starts running after it.