Review My Script

[GorePhobia]

Hey guys the script I want you to read and review and tell me what you think is in the Horror Filmmaker's forum but I wanted to post something here because I don't think many people frequent the Filmmaker forum. So I will post the link to it here and if you guys get a chance read it for me and tell me what you think. I am very curious to see what Rod thinks about it since he is an actual screenwriter.

Thanks for your time.

My Missing Persons Script on the Horror Filmmaker Forum. (http://horror.com/forum/showthread.php?t=31929)

[Disease]

Will do..............

[GorePhobia]

Anyone else want to read and review my script. I want as much feedback as possible.

[the_real_linda]

im reading it now... always interested in new work, esp by anyone here

[GorePhobia]

im reading it now... always interested in new work, esp by anyone here

awesome

let me know in that thread what you think and any pointers you might have

[Roderick Usher]

http://kevan.org/brain.cgi?Rev.%20Sean.

this link might help you out.

[GorePhobia]

http://kevan.org/brain.cgi?Rev.%20Sean.

this link might help you out.

You tricked me!!

[the_real_linda]

lol i clicked the link as well....:D

[AmericanManiac]

http://kevan.org/brain.cgi?Rev.%20Sean.

this link might help you out.

I did as well :rolleyes:
I'll give it a read, I do like the Saw parody you did is it still on your myspace?

[GorePhobia]

I did as well :rolleyes:
I'll give it a read, I do like the Saw parody you did is it still on your myspace?

Yes sir it is.

[PR3SSUR3]

Something to do with the person behind that linked site had a movie on the Sci-Fi Channel once, but I can't remember the name of it.

Anyone?

[novakru]

I liked this script.

[GorePhobia]

I liked this script.

Thanks I really appreciate it.

I am going to do some rewrites on it to fix some of the dialouge and such.

[GorePhobia]

I touched the script up a bit everyone check it out and tell me what you think now.

It is in the forum of Horror Filmmakers.

[ferretchucker]

I wrote a short script a while back. See what you all think, it's on my website.

http://pic5.piczo.com/ferretchucker/?g=46524489&cr=5

[Psycom5k]

I'm no expert, but I have read the first script you posted, and all of the reveiws, and I can't really add anything new. I'll read the revised one later, don't have time now. Good job though.

[GorePhobia]

I'm no expert, but I have read the first script you posted, and all of the reveiws, and I can't really add anything new. I'll read the revised one later, don't have time now. Good job though.

Thanks man. Yeah it's sometimes hard to write a good script. As soon as I get a camera or start film school I am going to shoot this bad boy.

[ferretchucker]

Cool. I can't wait to see it. I only think it will be hard to get the right sets.

[GorePhobia]

Cool. I can't wait to see it. I only think it will be hard to get the right sets.

I scouted it all out. I have found a bathroom that is disclosed and I can use at 1-2AM that no one will harass us. So it's all good.

[ferretchucker]

What about the highway scene? How will you film that?

[GorePhobia]

on a highway late at night

[ferretchucker]

even the scenes inside the car?

[GorePhobia]

camera mount on the hood or i put the camera on the dash

there are many ways this can be done

[Disease]

The passenger seat is the way to go, the back seat as well....

[ferretchucker]

cool. Put it on youtube or something.

[GorePhobia]

when it's all done I will def. put it on youtube...

[ferretchucker]

looking forward to it. Got anybody in mind to be in it?

[GorePhobia]

Not yet really. I will probably put a casting call out and have some auditions for it.