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meganmyers
01-17-2007, 04:39 AM
Here's one I've been wanting to get done but it's still up for grabs. I call it the CHAMELEON BANDIT BABE because the villainess, RITA, has a knack for robbing innocent women, assuming their identity (along with the wardrobe) then using that identity to commit the next crime. She cleverly adapts instantly to whatever situation and personna she is in.

Tough girl Rita is hanging out in an alley, having a smoke and killing time when a cable tv/satellite dish installation chick (in a foxy little outfit) comes looking for a circuit box. Rita tells her it's inside this building but it's only a ploy to get the woman inside, beat her, rob her, have some girl on girl fun with her then leave. But, Rita notices that the babe's next work order is up in the ritzy suburbs so she don's the uniform (and identity) of the babe, kills her and heads for the burbs.

Up in the burbs, Rita robs a rich-bitch, spoiled-rotten, uptight housewife with an attitude and tortures her by blowing out her eardrum by hooking up a set of earphones to a boom box playing heavy metal music. Before leaving, Rita spies the cops coming to check out the house. They have apparently found the bimbo cable girl and checked her work orders. Rita clubs the housewife in the head, killing her and instantly assumes the identity just as the police arrive. She feigns being terrified and traumatized and puts on a good enough act to be allowed to go into the bedroom to freshen up.

While in there, Rita switches into new clothes, sneaks out a side door and spies a neighbor woman taking groceries out of her trunk. Rita messes up her hair and clothing then informs the unsuspecting lady that she got carjacked and needed help. The lady takes out her cell phone which Rita snatches away just as she knocks the woman in the head, dumps her in the trunk of her car and shuts it.

Rita drives to this seedy garage and meets a guy named Benny. He greets her and asks, "Where'd ya' get the car?" Rita says "Borrowed it." Rita walks around, opens the trunk, we see the neighbor lady and she says, "From her."

It seems Benny not only runs a chop shop but is a bit of white slaver when the opportunity knocks.

This one is good for an easy sequel if it would pay off with a lot of sales.

There's ample opportunity to make this as gore filled and bloody as you wish by extending the torture scenes. There's some fetish angles with bondage and the clothes swapping gimmick is a turn on to many folks. The cable girl's outfit is a cute little sassy attire which again, adds some extra fun to this romp. There are strip downs and clothes swapping and plenty of logical bondage type scenes. All around a fun romp no matter how you look at it.

Who wants it?

Megan meganmyers2004@yahoo.co.uk

Zero
01-17-2007, 04:54 AM
i want it. . . . . . . .



to go away quietly and die

Roderick Usher
01-17-2007, 07:49 AM
Don't exactly "want it" but I'd gladly give it a read and an honest critique.