My Poem

[melaniepants]

I Entered this in a Contest and i won $500!!

My heart bleeds
my eyes weep
look at what
youve done to me

Do you have any mercy?
Do you even have a heart?
Everything is gone
My World has fallen apart

The days go by slow
The nights seem to last forever
Sometimes i wish id never met you
I wish we were never together

You took the breath right out of me
You shattered my heart on the ground
You used and abused me
Is it in your blood to let everyone down?

But what has happened
is over and done
Your evil and cold
What have you become?

[Despare]

Very good, I liked it a lot.
(On a personal and somewhat sad note the used and abused line reminded me of Fern Gulley...)

[dw_horrorfan]

Short lines, direct, no frills. I like. If it was set to music, it would fit right into the best Cure album