My Scripts

[Shadowman]

Ok, I trust some of you guys on this site a lot. But, before I post my script, I need to ask you all which script I should post, I'll put the title and what the movie is about, then at maybe 5:00, I'll post the script you want.

Corpses--- The last eight people in the world are surrounded by the dead in a construction site. The helicopter is low on gas. But the good thing is, they are on a plaza with food and a mall! But how long will it be before the dead breaks in. The Dead always find a way.

Dead--- A deadly oil explosion causes the dead to come back to life. And terrorizes a group of people in a school and that leads to the climax, onto of a plateau in the middle of the desert with the military.

Child's Play (remake) [rough draft]--- A modern remake to Child's play. A boy gets a doll for his birthday and finds out that it has been possessed by a killer.

The Cops of Burnside {short} [rough draft]---Policemen go on a random killing spree after they THINK that a sunburn virus has been released, killing everyone they see. Now people must try to escape from the town before they die.

Halloween 10 [Rough draft]--- Michael breaks into the Haddonfield hospital and finds a file of a close relative, and he also finds out that he never killed Laurie or Jamie. Now Michael is angrier than ever and chases the whole family to Las Vegas.

Jason vs. Ash [Rough Draft]--- Jason has been told by demons to go to Ash’s cabin to kill bad teenagers. Ash has been forced back to the cabin by the demons, and there are teens and family’s on their way up to the cabin. Now, not only does ash have to fight the Demons, he has to fight the hardest fight ever, Jason Voorhees, and Jason has his on problems with the demons… LET THE BATTLE BEGIN!!!

Pain & Desire [Rough Draft] --- A boy is madly in love with a girl. So he goes to HER house and finds out she’s crazy. Now him and his friend are trapped in the crazy girl’s mansion with her crazy dogs and he wild voodoo.

Scream on Halloween if you know what I did on Elm Street last Friday the 13th while chucky and leprechaun were watching final destination with the Texas chainsaw massacre and Norman Bates was digging in pet Sematary [rough draft] {short}--- A comedy of all of the serial killers with their own story.

Shadow Man [Rough draft] {short}--- A demon takes shadow form and stalks teenagers.

Shadow Man 2: The Return of the Shadow Man [Rough Draft] {short}--- The Shadow Man stalks more victims in a town.

Shadow Man 3: The End of the Shadow Man [Rough Draft] {short}--- The shadow man finds it’s last victims and goes on a killing spree, but finds it’s end.

R.L. Stein’s Zombie Town {short}--- A boy and his friend go to see a movie, when they leave the theater, the town is infected by zombies, and the boy is the only one left.

[Dante'sInferno]

I kind of like Jason V.S. Ash myself.:)

[Dante'sInferno]

Scream on Halloween if you know what I did on Elm Street last Friday the 13th while chucky and leprechaun were watching final destination with the Texas chainsaw massacre and Norman Bates was digging in pet Sematary [rough draft] {short}--- A comedy of all of the serial killers with their own story.





I like that one too.:)

[Shadowman]

lol, the first story in the script isn't too origional, I copied that from another spoof called

Shriek if you know what I did last friday the 13th

[Dante'sInferno]

Yeah,i read some over your Jason VS Ash script.It's preety good so far.I am also going to be a Director.I have a script in the works.That will re-define the horror genre.By the way your sig is awome.Funniest scene in Pulp Fiction.:D

[Shadowman]

Originally posted by Dante'sInferno
Yeah,i read some over your Jason VS Ash script.It's preety good so far.:D Thanks, PM me when you finish it.

[bloodrayne]

Originally posted by Shadowman
Ok, I trust you guys on this site a lot. Umm....Why?



:p

[Shadowman]

Originally posted by bloodrayne
Umm....Why?



:p

Lol

[Posher778]

Halloween 10? Please...... Jamie is dead, let her stay dead, so's laurie, finally. Can't we just let michael be dead too? Just this once? Pleasee???

Corpses sounded way too similar to dawn of the dead, with the mall thing.

Others were pretty cool though.

[bwind22]

Originally posted by bloodrayne
Umm....Why?



:p


My thoughts exactly.


Even if this person trusts a couple people he talks to on here, there are still lots of people he couldn't possibly know and what's to stop one of them or someone showing up a year from now from stealing his ideas?

[Shadowman]

I never said I trusted all of you.

[Posher778]

Originally posted by Shadowman
I never said I trusted all of you.

Never said you didn't.

[The_Return]

Originally posted by Posher778
Halloween 10? Please...... Jamie is dead, let her stay dead, so's laurie, finally. Can't we just let michael be dead too? Just this once? Pleasee???

Do we really want him to be permantly killed by Busta Rhymes? I think Halloween deserves one more sequel with work put into it to tie up the storylines and give Mike a proper end.

[Shadowman]

so... if you want to read one of my scripts, PM me.

[Thorns_demon]

corpses => isn't that the piece from dawn of the dead? or did really got this idea from that movie? not really original but ok. I wanna make movies too, have some nice ideas but i'm makin a story of them but then people can fantasize about it when they read it and that's not what I had in mind, I want them to see what I see lol:D

[Thorns_demon]

well I had an idea for a movie somethin with a haunted house of some kind, not just ghost but with demons but when you look at all the movies with haunted houses, they all have the same storyline, kind of , ugh we never get a 100% unique idea

[nitekilla22]

this isnt official this is just made by me.
plz comment it n tell me what u think.

Friday the 13th- The New Motive


Camp Crystal Lake - after Freddy vs Jason

Cut to:

Tommy Jarvis and Megan Garris married and living in a big house near Camp Crystal Lake.

Tommy: Hey its Friday the 13th today! It remembers me bad memories!

Megan: C'mon Tom its just past times.

Tommy: Tell me honestly Meg, do ya think Jason is really dead?

Megan:...hmmmmm yeah, do you have any doubts about it?
You killed him in that lake, you drowned and then the boat engine destroyed him! Do you think
he is alive after all this?!

Tommy:(imgaging) Jason is in front of him with a spear that he stabs it in Megs eye.
Tommy: Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!

Megan: Are you okay?

Tommy:...huh? yeah.

Megan: Well why you screamed like that?

Tommy: never mind, ill go to have a sleep.

Megan: oooook, (doubting that Tommy saw Jason)

Cut to:


Jason in camp crystal lake, with freddy's head in hand.
Jason stabs his machete in freddy's forehead and gives him his final shot.
After that freddy returns to the nightmare division and seeks for other Elm Street kids because
in Elm Street have come 3 new families.


Cut to:

1 hour later:

Jason in front of Tommy's house.
Megan walking to go to the bathroom hears a noise.
She enters the bathroom and when she sees on the bathtub the servant's head she screams
but in that moment Jason cuts her in half. The blood spreads all over the
bathroom.
Tommy that heard some noise of that, walks to see what happened.
He goes near the guest room and he doesn't see anything so he is calm now.
Suddenly Jason puts his machete in the middle of two chests and crushes Tommy's head in the
machete, leaving him dead.


Cut to:

Tommy's house:

12 hours later.

Police has arrived an is examining the crime scene.

Policeman 1: Oh my God, who can do this kinda things?

Policeman 2:ha! Didn't ya heard of Jason Voorhees, maybe you're new in the departament or not?

Policeman 1: Yes im new here, as far as i know Jaso in dead. Before i was in the Boston departament for 7 years but i've never seen such a brutal crime like
this.

Policeman 2:Who knows! Maybe he revives. Well welcome to the police world !

Policeman 1: I said i have been a policeman for 7 years ok?
So no need to welcome me.

Cut to:

Camp crystal lake.

A fisherman in a small boat.
After fishing he goes to the land and suddenly he sees Jason.
Jason, ready to stab him with his machete stops after the fisherman cries: STOP!! Just listen to my words
before you kill me!
Jason stops.

Fisherman: It's me Jason! Elias! I'm your dad!

Jason looks surprised.

Elias: Your mother wanted to kill and to kill after you drowned but revenge is not the good way.
Jason.
You must learn to live your life and not only kill.

Jason (after he had enough) stabs him in the arm and injures him.
Elias runs for his life but strangely, Jason does not go to follow and finish him.



Cut to:

Sean , Tommy's best friend, angry and seeking revenge.
He goes to Camp Crystal Lake armed with a .50 CAL gun and searches everywhere for Jason.
He finds an old injured man that needs help. After Sean helps the old man:

Man: Thank You son! I can't believe that even my only son hurt me.

Sean: What is your name and who is your son?

Man: My name is Elias Voorhees and my son is Jason.

Sean:(angry and surprised) What?! Do you want to be with me and kill that as*hole Jason? He also killed
my best friend, Tommy!

Elias: No! Please don't kill him! He is depressed by the death of his mom, just like you are by the death of your friend.

Sean: What!? You want or no I will kill that son of a b*tch.

Elias: Well first you have to kill me!

Sean: Oh yeah? if u want it take it (shoots him in the head with the gun)

(Elias is dead)

In that moment Jason saw who killed his father and becomes really angry.
Sean: you son of a b*tch this is what i was waiting for.
Shoots him 6 times but Jason is fine. Jason grabs Sean's gun and breaks it in half.
Then he rotates Sean's head and completely cut it.
Jason stabs Sean's body, until there is only blood and not even a limb.
The camera zooms in Jason's face and we can see a drip of tear for his father.



Cut to:

Jason in his destroyed shed looking to his mother's head.
(remembers)

small Jason: Mom, why i don't have a dad like the other kids?

Pamela: Because he left me, he didn't love you. He could't grow you up like i did.
But i love you Jason, I will never leave you Jason. NEVER!

(then remembers)

smaller Jason in the forest walking alone.
A young man comes and plays with him and tells him that he loves him.
The man was Elias. He tells that he loves Jason and he left because
the family was too poor and he couldn't do anything to grow Jason healthy so he left to
go in another city for a job. But he never returned.

(in reality)

Jason stands up and again drops a tear.
He decides to kill every single member of the Sean Cunningan's family.


Cut to:

Sean's house.

His wife, Rennie, opens the door and sees to cops telling that his husband has died.
The cops handle the casket with the body in it to Rennie.

1 hour later:

She cries and decides to soo how the body was.
She opens the casket and what to see? The machete straight to her eye!
Jason stabs her many times and puts her in the casket and closes it.

In the other room there is the youger brother of Sean. He is 18.
He is sleeping. Jason grabs some long scissors and stabs him with them
in the nose many times. After that he closes the bed, breaking Sean's brother in half.



Cut to:

Sean's sister house.

She is making out with her boyfriend.
Jason comes in front of the house. The house is in a city and Sean's sister, Kayla is very rich so she
has 2 guards.
Jason eliminates one by breaking his neck and the other by slitting him with his hand.
He also grabs a long knife.

After entering the house, Jason goes to their room and kills Kayla with the knife in the head.
Then she falls in her boyfriend, Tony, with her knife in her forehead she accidentally kills even
Tony.

Jason leaves the house.



Cut to:

Jason returning to Camp Crystal Lake.

He goes to his shed and rest but he sees many cops placing TNTs in trees.
He kills some but there are too much planting TNTs and escaping to a helicopter.
Then, in the helicopter there is also Chris Higgins:

Chris: Die motherf*cker!!!

And presses the button of the TNTs.


(a big explode)



Cut to:

Camp Crystal Lake totally burnt.

Jason totally black and laying down
(A calm music plays)
Jason's hand begins to move and a scary music plays.



(credits)

[Shadowman]

Ok, I had to stop reading it because... it reminds me of how I wrote my scripts 2 years ago when I was 9,10, 11 and 12... It has bad dialouge (Most of my scripts do) and it seems childish like Shadowman series, Scream on halloween, and Halloween 10. If you compare those 5 to this one, you'll know what I mean. "It remembers me bad memories"?? I got confused when I read this. And I'm sick of seeing Jarvis in all of the Jason movies.

Originally posted by nitekilla22
this isnt official this is just made by me.
plz comment it n tell me what u think.

Friday the 13th- The New Motive


Camp Crystal Lake - after Freddy vs Jason

Cut to:

Tommy Jarvis and Megan Garris married and living in a big house near Camp Crystal Lake.

Tommy: Hey its Friday the 13th today! It remembers me bad memories!

Megan: C'mon Tom its just past times.

Tommy: Tell me honestly Meg, do ya think Jason is really dead?

Megan:...hmmmmm yeah, do you have any doubts about it?
You killed him in that lake, you drowned and then the boat engine destroyed him! Do you think
he is alive after all this?!

Tommy:(imgaging) Jason is in front of him with a spear that he stabs it in Megs eye.
Tommy: Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!

Megan: Are you okay?

Tommy:...huh? yeah.

Megan: Well why you screamed like that?

Tommy: never mind, ill go to have a sleep.

Megan: oooook, (doubting that Tommy saw Jason)

Cut to:


Jason in camp crystal lake, with freddy's head in hand.
Jason stabs his machete in freddy's forehead and gives him his final shot.
After that freddy returns to the nightmare division and seeks for other Elm Street kids because
in Elm Street have come 3 new families.


Cut to:

1 hour later:

Jason in front of Tommy's house.
Megan walking to go to the bathroom hears a noise.
She enters the bathroom and when she sees on the bathtub the servant's head she screams
but in that moment Jason cuts her in half. The blood spreads all over the
bathroom.
Tommy that heard some noise of that, walks to see what happened.
He goes near the guest room and he doesn't see anything so he is calm now.
Suddenly Jason puts his machete in the middle of two chests and crushes Tommy's head in the
machete, leaving him dead.


Cut to:

Tommy's house:

12 hours later.

Police has arrived an is examining the crime scene.

Policeman 1: Oh my God, who can do this kinda things?

Policeman 2:ha! Didn't ya heard of Jason Voorhees, maybe you're new in the departament or not?

Policeman 1: Yes im new here, as far as i know Jaso in dead. Before i was in the Boston departament for 7 years but i've never seen such a brutal crime like
this.

Policeman 2:Who knows! Maybe he revives. Well welcome to the police world !

Policeman 1: I said i have been a policeman for 7 years ok?
So no need to welcome me.

Cut to:

Camp crystal lake.

A fisherman in a small boat.
After fishing he goes to the land and suddenly he sees Jason.
Jason, ready to stab him with his machete stops after the fisherman cries: STOP!! Just listen to my words
before you kill me!
Jason stops.

Fisherman: It's me Jason! Elias! I'm your dad!

Jason looks surprised.

Elias: Your mother wanted to kill and to kill after you drowned but revenge is not the good way.
Jason.
You must learn to live your life and not only kill.

Jason (after he had enough) stabs him in the arm and injures him.
Elias runs for his life but strangely, Jason does not go to follow and finish him.



Cut to:

Sean , Tommy's best friend, angry and seeking revenge.
He goes to Camp Crystal Lake armed with a .50 CAL gun and searches everywhere for Jason.
He finds an old injured man that needs help. After Sean helps the old man:

Man: Thank You son! I can't believe that even my only son hurt me.

Sean: What is your name and who is your son?

Man: My name is Elias Voorhees and my son is Jason.

Sean:(angry and surprised) What?! Do you want to be with me and kill that as*hole Jason? He also killed
my best friend, Tommy!

Elias: No! Please don't kill him! He is depressed by the death of his mom, just like you are by the death of your friend.

Sean: What!? You want or no I will kill that son of a b*tch.

Elias: Well first you have to kill me!

Sean: Oh yeah? if u want it take it (shoots him in the head with the gun)

(Elias is dead)

In that moment Jason saw who killed his father and becomes really angry.
Sean: you son of a b*tch this is what i was waiting for.
Shoots him 6 times but Jason is fine. Jason grabs Sean's gun and breaks it in half.
Then he rotates Sean's head and completely cut it.
Jason stabs Sean's body, until there is only blood and not even a limb.
The camera zooms in Jason's face and we can see a drip of tear for his father.



Cut to:

Jason in his destroyed shed looking to his mother's head.
(remembers)

small Jason: Mom, why i don't have a dad like the other kids?

Pamela: Because he left me, he didn't love you. He could't grow you up like i did.
But i love you Jason, I will never leave you Jason. NEVER!

(then remembers)

smaller Jason in the forest walking alone.
A young man comes and plays with him and tells him that he loves him.
The man was Elias. He tells that he loves Jason and he left because
the family was too poor and he couldn't do anything to grow Jason healthy so he left to
go in another city for a job. But he never returned.

(in reality)

Jason stands up and again drops a tear.
He decides to kill every single member of the Sean Cunningan's family.


Cut to:

Sean's house.

His wife, Rennie, opens the door and sees to cops telling that his husband has died.
The cops handle the casket with the body in it to Rennie.

1 hour later:

She cries and decides to soo how the body was.
She opens the casket and what to see? The machete straight to her eye!
Jason stabs her many times and puts her in the casket and closes it.

In the other room there is the youger brother of Sean. He is 18.
He is sleeping. Jason grabs some long scissors and stabs him with them
in the nose many times. After that he closes the bed, breaking Sean's brother in half.



Cut to:

Sean's sister house.

She is making out with her boyfriend.
Jason comes in front of the house. The house is in a city and Sean's sister, Kayla is very rich so she
has 2 guards.
Jason eliminates one by breaking his neck and the other by slitting him with his hand.
He also grabs a long knife.

After entering the house, Jason goes to their room and kills Kayla with the knife in the head.
Then she falls in her boyfriend, Tony, with her knife in her forehead she accidentally kills even
Tony.

Jason leaves the house.



Cut to:

Jason returning to Camp Crystal Lake.

He goes to his shed and rest but he sees many cops placing TNTs in trees.
He kills some but there are too much planting TNTs and escaping to a helicopter.
Then, in the helicopter there is also Chris Higgins:

Chris: Die motherf*cker!!!

And presses the button of the TNTs.


(a big explode)



Cut to:

Camp Crystal Lake totally burnt.

Jason totally black and laying down
(A calm music plays)
Jason's hand begins to move and a scary music plays.



(credits)

[nitekilla22]

oh cmons shadowman, i cant use dialogues like - "u di*k-sucking fu*kin b*tch" cuz were not in a porn movie. the dialogues can be changed but i asked ppl 2 comment the story not the dialogues.
thx anyway

[nitekilla22]

BTW im NOT a horror movie maker. im just a student. it was just a idea how could the movie be. i didn't give this scritp to a movie director and i wont give it cuz i kno it isnt that good but i just asked what u think. :)

[Shadowman]

Originally posted by nitekilla22
oh cmons shadowman, i cant use dialogues like - "u di*k-sucking fu*kin b*tch" cuz were not in a porn movie. the dialogues can be changed but i asked ppl 2 comment the story not the dialogues.
thx anyway

I wasn't commenting ALL on the dialouge, and besides, I'm trying to help you. And this is the EXAT same way I take critisism on my scripts, go to Simply scripts.com and search for my scripts... people act like dicks and make fun of my scripts.

[Shadowman]

so, if you guys can give me some ideas for my scripts, that'll be great.

[scaryminda15]

you know what i hate to say this but i agree with posh. let michael die because his sister is dead and she said "ill see you in hell" just before she fell but if i know the movies that might say she didnt die at all because they made us believe michael was dead in h20 when she cut his head off with the ax but it turned out to be the paramatic. just cant wait to see halloween ten.



here is idea there is this girl who loves the world but the world hates her because of how she looks, acts,and spells. she gets upset about it and gets determined to make sure she spells words write and then turns own others and if they dont spell a word right she kills them and spells the word right just before they die.

what do u think of my script so far?