Alright, I finally need some help.

[alkytrio666]

I'm directing a horror movie this summer. It's gonna be a real basic slasher movie, two serial killers after a couple of teens. The killers drag victims back to a toolshed where they are tortured and killed in oh so horrible ways, as thought up through my sick mind.

I have two requests:

1. I NEED A TITLE! I have a bacic script and a fairly thought out game plan, but I can't think of a title! "The Toolshed" is too plain, and one thought was "Bloodshed", but, as you can see in this forum, it's already been used. PLEASE GIMME ANY TITLE IDEAS YOU HAVE!

2. Any cool kill/dialogue/effects scenes you guys think would fit well. I've got a few in mind, but I know there are others on this site who could come up with good ones, too.

I've never asked for help before, so PLEASE someone take this somewhat seriously, and this is open to anyone.

Thanks, guys.

[urgeok]

the toolshed killers



maybe someone will get it confused with toolbox killer.
that could be a good thing..

[RavageRitual]

The way I think up names for horror movies is to think up heavy metal band names. Its easier and they end up sounding pretty good. Youll probobly think these suck though...just ideas...

Beyond Madness
Beyond Death
Beyond Macabre

god know you can do whatever you want with the word "beyond"


Blood Killers
Blood Brother
Macabre Fantasy
Cryptic Fantasy
Killing Temptation
Distorted Minds
Sadistic Desire (my fav)
Substratum

[Posher778]

The Killing room?
Toolshed massacres
shed of doom! :) not really

[RavageRitual]

Originally posted by Posher778
The Killing room?


thats not bad...

you could change the word "killing" into something different and make it not so typical. That would make that a really good idea.

[Posher778]

slaughter house? :)

[sabersword]

Alky,can you give us a little more? Maby some plot without giving to much away? That would help. There is only so much you can do with toolshed. Have you ever noticed how many movies start with,Night of or,the night of?

[alkytrio666]

Originally posted by sabersword
Alky,can you give us a little more? Maby some plot without giving to much away? That would help. There is only so much you can do with toolshed. Have you ever noticed how many movies start with,Night of or,the night of?

Of course. You guys are awesome, giving me so much feedback. So here goes- the basic storyline:

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Two buddies are on their way to visit some friends in Illinois. They are coming from college to visit for a weekend. One of the two starts having repeating dreams of himself and his friend dying, over and over, though he never sees his killer's face. He starts noticing small things from his dreams, such as a watch, or shoes, that appear in real life. Kinda like deja vu-ish.

Anyway, somehow (I haven't decided quite how), they're going to get lost in the forest, and eventually one dies. The other escapes, dillusional.

He finally finds his way to the cabin and meets the friends he originaly intended to visit, but can't remember what exactly happened. They discover his pal's body in the trunk of the car.

He pleads and pleads, telling them it wasn't him.

One by one his friends start being knocked off, and he strives to find answers to clear himself of the murders and stop the rest from happening.
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Kind of lame, I know, but hell it's just for fun and I'm gaining experience. I'm loving all the suggestions, please keep them coming, you guys rock.

If it means anything, each and every one of you will appear in the credits for helping haha.

THANKS, and keep 'em coming, all the feedback so far is great!

[Despare]

The Blood Shed (or just Blood Shed)
Chop Shack
For deaths there's a lot you can do with a good toolshed although I like the more brutal things like slamming somebody's head in one of those big tool chests. Another good one...

Have an eye hook screwed into the wall with some thin stainless aircraft cable attached to it. Have the cable come out then wrap once around somebody's neck and the have it attached to a brace (one of those handheld drills that rotate) which is fastened in a vice. As the brace is turned the cable tightens around it and the neck until finally the cable begins to cut and you can go as far as decapitation.

Obviously pneumatic tools like die grinders and nail guns. Oh, an overlooked vicious tool is the wire wheel side of a bench grinder, ouch.

[sinistar]

The Landscrapers muahaha... *cough*

no, like the other dude said, Blood Shed!

[Despare]

Two other underutilized power drill attachments...
Spade Bit
Hole Saw

[slasherman]

..do you have any idea how those two slasher guys gonna look like ? ....one of the the most important aspects of a slasher...

we dont need a Batman and Robin in the slasher genre....so they both have to look cool........not like Robin

my idea for a title.....try to find two suitable names for your slasher characters...

eksample: Myers and Ghostface (not vs)

The day Myers and Ghostface changed the world :p

[Nyarlathotep]

last shed on the left

[urgeok]

the revenge of Arthur 2 Sheds JAckson

[RavageRitual]

Originally posted by Despare
The Blood Shed (or just Blood Shed)
Chop Shack
For deaths there's a lot you can do with a good toolshed although I like the more brutal things like slamming somebody's head in one of those big tool chests. Another good one...

Have an eye hook screwed into the wall with some thin stainless aircraft cable attached to it. Have the cable come out then wrap once around somebody's neck and the have it attached to a brace (one of those handheld drills that rotate) which is fastened in a vice. As the brace is turned the cable tightens around it and the neck until finally the cable begins to cut and you can go as far as decapitation.

Obviously pneumatic tools like die grinders and nail guns. Oh, an overlooked vicious tool is the wire wheel side of a bench grinder, ouch.

great Ideas despare!

what about .....

The Hack Shack?

[Nyarlathotep]

Originally posted by urgeok
the revenge of Arthur 2 Sheds JAckson

are the killers thinking of purchasing a second shed to bring them in line with their epithet?

[zomb5150]

how about simply...... "The Shed":)

[urgeok]

Originally posted by Nyarlathotep
are the killers thinking of purchasing a second shed to bring them in line with their epithet?

i think Arthur had the origional shed torn down.

that could be part of the plot .. they had another shed, but it was torn down.

this would have to be shown in a prologue sequence of course - or maybe during the opening credits.

[Nyarlathotep]

Originally posted by urgeok
i think Arthur had the origional shed torn down.

that could be part of the plot .. they had another shed, but it was torn down.

this would have to be shown in a prologue sequence of course - or maybe during the opening credits.

he did talk about selling it........maybe the frustrated musician out for revenge...a la phantom

[urgeok]

Originally posted by Nyarlathotep
he did talk about selling it........maybe the frustrated musician out for revenge...a la phantom

i hear he has a theory about dinosaurs

[Nyarlathotep]

Originally posted by urgeok
i hear he has a theory about dinosaurs

he was interested in trainspotting as well

[erotic_cookie]

What about "The Happy, Fun, Super Shed Killing and Games Movie" :D

No really, I don't have any good ideas for a movie title.

[alkytrio666]

Thank you all for your positive, and even your crazy, feedback.

Keep 'em coming, but I'm seriously considering RR's Hack Shack idea, inspired by Despare.

But still, these are great. And thanks for the cool ideas, Despare. Very creative.

[Despare]

I like Hack Shack a lot.
If you do any hacking with hatchets or axes make them dull so there's some bone chipping and the killer needs a couple swings not just one clean cut. Mmmmmm gore.

[alkytrio666]

Originally posted by Despare
I like Hack Shack a lot.
If you do any hacking with hatchets or axes make them dull so there's some bone chipping and the killer needs a couple swings not just one clean cut. Mmmmmm gore.

'Atta boy, Despare- we think alike.

I wish I could ship you out here to help me for a summer, haha.

[urgeok]

Originally posted by alkytrio666
'Atta boy, Despare- we think alike.

I wish I could ship you out here to help me for a summer, haha.


then you could cut him up.... and eat him,
and make a jacket out of his bones !

[alkytrio666]

Originally posted by urgeok
then you could cut him up.... and eat him,
and make a jacket out of his bones !

And make a stew out of his tongue and spleen.

I mean- shut up Urge, I'm not that sick!

[urgeok]

ok .. i went too far ..

ixnay on the jacketay

[alkytrio666]

Originally posted by urgeok
ok .. i went too far ..

ixnay on the jacketay

Naw, forget about it. I kinda liked the jacket idea, anyway.

[urgeok]

haha i should have said 'acketjay'

[RavageRitual]

Alky, Im really happy to see you like the idea of it being called

"Hack Shack"

I was surprised when I thought of that, I dont always think of good ideas.

[RavageRitual]

oh and if you have a sequal in your head you can easily call it...

"Back to the Hack Shack"

[alkytrio666]

Originally posted by RavageRitual
oh and if you have a sequal in your head you can easily call it...

"Back to the Hack Shack"

Oh, you are fuckin' on.

[urgeok]

people are going to think it's about taxi drivers

[Despare]

Band saws, belt sanders, extension cords, a generator, an air compressor, a swaging tool, a PVC cable saw... man I'm getting giddy thinking about all the messy thing you can do with tools! OOOOOO I know! A big electric drain auger, the 100 foot ones with the one inch cable and the big root auger on it, now THAT sounds like fun. A plate compactor would be fun, an areator, ok I'll stop now I'm just overwhelmed with horrific ideas.

[RavageRitual]

I know Alky is gonna do a good job with this. I really cant wait for him to get it going. I hope he keeps the storyline he showed us. I think it is really good. I hope it has some pretty good amounts of gore in it too! lol

[alkytrio666]

Originally posted by RavageRitual
I know Alky is gonna do a good job with this. I really cant wait for him to get it going. I hope he keeps the storyline he showed us. I think it is really good. I hope it has some pretty good amounts of gore in it too! lol

Oh it will.

And you bet your ass I'll be sending you a copy out of the first batch when it's all said and done.

[Despare]

Hurry up already, I'm already excited to see it!

[alkytrio666]

Haha, I'm glad to see the film already has fan support, but I'm afraid it could take all summer.

But you WILL be kept updated, my friends.

[Despare]

So somebody goes into this shed and looks around when all of the sudden from behind we see the killer slam a pitchfork into the victim's shoulders and push him up against the wall. The kid struggles with the pitchfork blades in his shoulders pinning him against the wall, blood pours down his back as he squirms helplessly. The madman picks up a landscape scraper with his free hand (it doesn't take much power to pin somebody against the wall if there are sharp prongs digging into his back)...
http://www.2and2.net/Uploads/Images/027997008406.jpg
and then slams the chipping blade into the back of the victims neck severing his spinal column and then maybe he'll continue until the head rolls from the victim's shoulders before he pulls the pitchfork away and allows the corpse to hit the floor with a sickening thud.

[alkytrio666]

Originally posted by Despare
So somebody goes into this shed and looks around when all of the sudden from behind we see the killer slam a pitchfork into the victim's shoulders and push him up against the wall. The kid struggles with the pitchfork blades in his shoulders pinning him against the wall, blood pours down his back as he squirms helplessly. The madman picks up a landscape scraper with his free hand (it doesn't take much power to pin somebody against the wall if there are sharp prongs digging into his back)...
http://www.2and2.net/Uploads/Images/027997008406.jpg
and then slams the chipping blade into the back of the victims neck severing his spinal column and then maybe he'll continue until the head rolls from the victim's shoulders before he pulls the pitchfork away and allows the corpse to hit the floor with a sickening thud.

Helluva' idea. I'm using it- is that cool? You will be credited for your geniousness.

[Despare]

Yeah that's ok, I can't wait to see it. Do you want us to continue posting good (or not so good) death scene ideas or are you set already? I have a pretty good knowledge of tools and often think about how they would work in horror movies heh.

[alkytrio666]

Originally posted by Despare
Yeah that's ok, I can't wait to see it. Do you want us to continue posting good (or not so good) death scene ideas or are you set already? I have a pretty good knowledge of tools and often think about how they would work in horror movies heh.

Oh, hell yah dude. I need all I can get for ideas/inspirations. You can never have too much. I'll keep this thread as the "official thread" for the film, too, so I can keep you and RR and anyone else who cares updated through the summer.

[The_Return]

Geeze....

Im not even much of a slasher fan and this is making my mouth water! Cant wait!

PS - I think Hack Shack is a great name...

[Thomasgeorge]

I got a kill for ya a girl walks in to the shed and the door slams shut she jumps and turns around and sees the kiler with a hose pipe he shoves it down her throat and pulls it out of her chest

[Despare]

Killer could take a swing at a victim's head with a long handled bulb planter and knock him down. While the victim is down the killer could put the bulb planter against his head (side, front, back, whatever) and step down hard.
Here's a planter!

http://doitbest.com/DoItBest/Main.aspx?PageID=64&SKU=706542

It'd be vicious...

[urgeok]

i always liked the oilcan spout in the chest gag ..


i think it's been done in a movie - but i swear i was the 1st to think of it .. honest

[Thomasgeorge]

The killer could boil someones face and make his friend's eat it

[The Flayed One]

If it's not to late for name suggestions, you could use 'Shedding Skin'

[alkytrio666]

Originally posted by urgeok
i always liked the oilcan spout in the chest gag ..


i think it's been done in a movie - but i swear i was the 1st to think of it .. honest

Please elaborate.

[alkytrio666]

Originally posted by Despare
Killer could take a swing at a victim's head with a long handled bulb planter and knock him down. While the victim is down the killer could put the bulb planter against his head (side, front, back, whatever) and step down hard.
Here's a planter!

http://doitbest.com/DoItBest/Main.aspx?PageID=64&SKU=706542

It'd be vicious...

I love it. Will most likely use the bulb planter, will definately do the "stepping on a tool-penetrate the head".

[alkytrio666]

Originally posted by The Flayed One
If it's not to late for name suggestions, you could use 'Shedding Skin'

Not bad, not bad. And nope, never too late for titles until the film is done.

[Despare]

Originally posted by alkytrio666
I love it. Will most likely use the bulb planter, will definately do the "stepping on a tool-penetrate the head".
Bulb planter would be good in the side of the head or chest or anything... can be very brutal. Mwa ha ha.

[Angelakillsluts]

How about "The Diabolical Toolshed Murder Nazis"

huh huh????

I'm trying to think of a couple more words to add to the end, that will really make people want to see it.

[urgeok]

Originally posted by alkytrio666
Please elaborate.


i was going to do a parody of TCM years ago .. called the Brockville Weedeater Massacre ..

was going to tape it at our local (unused) mini golf place ..
where a crazed caretaker went on a murderous rampage with a weedeater (which never actually did anything other that sting)

but there would be some kills .. one being the killer takes an oilcan spout from a can of oil .. stalks the victim, then thrusts it into his chest - using it to lift him off the ground .. all the while blood gushing out of the spout to the sounds of 'ding, ding, ding' like at the gas pumps ..

as it was an idea around the time of Jaws .. i wanted to have someone being stabbed with a machette or something .. and first comes a guyser of blood, then articles of food, then coat hangers, licence plates, etc .. all splashing onto the killers feet from the victims wound.

alas - i never actually had the drive and ambition to do it.


my friend and i years later were musing over what we could do to make the most offensive film possible .. thereby getting negative coverage = publicity.

we came up wit the idea "the Tards" 2 developementally handicapped men living together ..

basically just a day at the mall...

once scene .. one of the tards goes to the bathroom, 20 minutes later comes out - crying, naked, and covered in shit ... so he goes to the large fountain to wash off...

we had several horrible little scenes like that planned...

the climax of course .. would be in a china shop.

since then .. people have actually done similar movies ..

again .. we were all talk - no action.

[alkytrio666]

Hahahahahahahaha.

Oh man. If it's ok with you, I'd love to use the oil spout idea.

[urgeok]

Originally posted by alkytrio666
Hahahahahahahaha.

Oh man. If it's ok with you, I'd love to use the oil spout idea.


its not like i pattened it ..

i'm sure i've seen the gag used in a film since .. made me laugh when i saw it ..

[Despare]

You know those large metal stakes that chase moles away by creating vibration in the earth and they run on batteries? What if one was planted into a victim (head, body... whatever) and as the blood poured out and the victim died the stake kept vibrating (maybe even make it vibrate more violently for film heh) and shaking the body.

[alkytrio666]

Originally posted by Despare
You know those large metal stakes that chase moles away by creating vibration in the earth and they run on batteries? What if one was planted into a victim (head, body... whatever) and as the blood poured out and the victim died the stake kept vibrating (maybe even make it vibrate more violently for film heh) and shaking the body.

Now that would be fuckin' cool.

But remember- I'm a 16 year old kid with a hella' small budget.

[Despare]

Originally posted by alkytrio666
Now that would be fuckin' cool.

But remember- I'm a 16 year old kid with a hella' small budget.

I know, just suggestions that might be cool heh. Anyway, 20 bux for a pest chaser and then all you need is some gore and an actor who can shudder convincingly. What about gore, are you going all fake or doing the pig guts route for some more convincing material as a base?

[alkytrio666]

Originally posted by Despare
I know, just suggestions that might be cool heh. Anyway, 20 bux for a pest chaser and then all you need is some gore and an actor who can shudder convincingly. What about gore, are you going all fake or doing the pig guts route for some more convincing material as a base?

For this film it'll probably be all fake, though I've considered pig guts.

I've found a somewhat convincing Kairo mizture for blood.


Anyway, I LOVE these suggestions, please post whenever your sick little mind brews something new.

:)

[Despare]

Lawn edger... nuff' said.

Sorry about the HUGE pic :(

http://www.2and2.net/Uploads/Images/lawnedger.jpg