Writing

[Posher778]

For the people who have read my story, do you think i should keep writing horror stories like that? I'm editing the one in the fiction section right now, and putting more graphic material and dialogue into it to make it longer and more real, but i have other ideas for stories. Do you think i should work on them and post more here?:confused:

[novakru]

Yes:)

[Posher778]

thanks, i'm trying to decide what i want to write next. i'm having... wannabe writer's block

[Posher778]

I thought of an idea, some of my friends think it might be cool, but i dont really no how to start it out.

I was thinking it would be about a man or woman, dunno yet, and something would happen to their eyes, like, and accident causes them to temporarily be blinded. And they had a major surgery, and vision will return in a day or so, but they have to wear a blindfold until then, and the person lives in manhattan, and a friend offers them the chance to spend the night at a relatives mansion off in the country side so they won't have to worry about getting run over or anything, and being in the quiet country side to relax until they're vision returns. While blind in the house however, weird things start happening, and he feels that he isnt alone, so he thinks that it might be the grandfather or his friend, but they will have already been killed, and he finds out that the house is filled with demons and spirits, but with no one to help him, he can't find his way out of the huge house, and the ghosts haunt him, and he finds out secrets about the house and why there are spirits there, but theyre hunting him down too. I'm sure that i will tweak and change some things around a bit, but i need some input.. any comments?

[RavageRitual]

Kinda Reminded me of "The Eye" cept a lil different. How old are you Posher?

[Posher778]

15. ive never seen the eye. what do you think though

[RavageRitual]

IDK, doesnt make a whole lotta sence, like if you had to have your eyes bandaged they would keep you at the hospital. and second of all if its a friend whos taking the blind person to some place, would that friend be w/ the blind person to help him get out. Other than that not a bad idea.

The Eye is about a girl that was blind, and got a surgery done, and when she was able to see again she had the ability to see ghosts.

[Posher778]

i said the friend was killed before the guy needed help getting out.

hmm, maybe they let him out of the hospital because the friend was going to take care of him. it was just an eye surgery. and we could suspect that maybe he was already there for a long time, and he was well enough that if he was watched he could leave.

But, it doesnt make much sense because i'm still preplanning, i've NEVER written a ghost story before, so i need some ideas, or itll turn out like ghost ship, and i would shoot myself.

[RavageRitual]

ok, good ideas Posher. and good idea for a story. You gotta agree though. sounds alot like The Eye.

Im leaving for a lil, Il be back on in about a half an hour.

[Posher778]

i take your word for it, never seen the eye. cya ina bit

[RavageRitual]

Im sure when others see this Thread they will agree w/ me

[The_Return]

You should rent The Eye before you get to involved in writing that...it's not identical by any means, but sounds kinda like the difference between TCM and Ho1kC. IE- Not much.

[Posher778]

tcm? not at all.

[Angelakillsluts]

Originally posted by The_Return
You should rent The Eye before you get to involved in writing that...it's not identical by any means, but sounds kinda like the difference between TCM and Ho1kC. IE- Not much.


I agree. Sounds like a good idea though, posher.

[Posher778]

thanks.