I wanted to get some feeback

[AmericanManiac]

Please tell me what you think good & bad, I would like to know if I should start on a script or just leave the idea alone. That being said , I had a idea for a movie that came to me in a dream, and wanted some feedback. So the main character would be this little girl, comes from a wealthy family. ( Mom & Dad respected by all in the neighborhood.) At first she starts to hear voices, after a couple of days it moves onto seeing dead people, this goes on through out the whole movie, revealing certain things until the end, where she finds out that they are victims of her father (his secret life is Serial Killer)

[MichaelMyers]

She sees dead people?

[AUSTIN316426808]

Sounds like it could be good.

[AmericanManiac]

Originally posted by MichaelMyers
She sees dead people?
LOL, yeah the ghost of his victims.

[ItsAlive75]

So you wanna know if you should write a script about the idea or leave it alone? Write a script, what the hell could it hurt...

[AmericanManiac]

Originally posted by ItsAlive75
So you wanna know if you should write a script about the idea or leave it alone? Write a script, what the hell could it hurt...
I like your thinking ! :D

[VampiricClown]

Not too bad. I'd say go for it. I'm also working on one right now, so who knows?

[pinkfloyd45769]

Go for it, i've heard of/seen worse. I could never come up with this stuff, i could do sequels. Good luck with it...oh, i'm free if you need a main character or something!!! :D :D :D

[AmericanManiac]

Originally posted by pinkfloyd45769
Go for it, i've heard of/seen worse. I could never come up with this stuff, i could do sequels. Good luck with it...oh, i'm free if you need a main character or something!!! :D :D :D

Is that a promise ?? I need people in Ohio in PA when I get finished with the one i'm working on now. Everything will be paid for hotel rooms and all but you won't get paid lol. I've seen your pic in the pic thread ;) :D I think I have a crush :p

Edit : 1st write an outline. ALWAYS I knew that class in highschool that I always slept in would come back to bite me in the ass !

[pinkfloyd45769]

Originally posted by AmericanManiac
Is that a promise ?? I need people in Ohio in PA when I get finished with the one i'm working on now. Everything will be paid for hotel rooms and all but you won't get paid lol. I've seen your pic in the pic thread ;) :D I think I have a crush :p

Edit : I knew that class in highschool that I always slept in would come back to bite me in the ass ! I would be so fucking happy if you put me in your movie!!! I would spam the shit out of horror sites!!! :p

[RavageRitual]

I always thought that dreams are the best way to come up w/ Ideas.... dreams are always really messed up and really confusing unless you find ways to put them together...Ive always payed attention to what i dream. Because dreams are the best way to find what you and alot of others think is really scary...if you understand what im trying to say....

[ItsAlive75]

The dreams I have that I can even remember usually revolve around some nonsensical situation that could never be transmitted to page anyway... plus there's always so many boobs in em' I'd never get any rating lower than an NC-17.

[RavageRitual]

Originally posted by ItsAlive75
The dreams I have that I can even remember usually revolve around some nonsensical situation that could never be transmitted to page anyway... plus there's always so many boobs in em' I'd never get any rating lower than an NC-17.

I never have boobs in my dreams....damn

[ItsAlive75]

Originally posted by RavageRitual
I never have boobs in my dreams....damn

Try drinking pineapple juice before goin' to bed.

[AmericanManiac]

pinapple juice ? LOL, yes my ideas always comes in my dreams I can remember a bunch of them.

[MisterSadistro]

What am I supposed to be reading here ? I always give an honest opinion.
CK

[AmericanManiac]

Originally posted by MisterSadistro
What am I supposed to be reading here ? I always give an honest opinion.
CK
The very first post by me.

[bwind22]

I smoke too much greenery to ever remember my dreams. Any time I quit smokin', I start remembering them all very vividly and they are all so fucked up that it drives me back to smokin'.

[MisterSadistro]

Simple reason I didn't like it: I had to go back to read the post since I thought there was an attached screenplay :D
Nah, it's a very good premise to me. It all depends on how you eventually flesh it out that matters most. I'd say go with it, good luck, and be more careful of where you post your ideas since they become fair game at that point for anyone to steal.
CK

[Haunted]

Originally posted by bwind22
I smoke too much greenery to ever remember my dreams. Any time I quit smokin', I start remembering them all very vividly and they are all so fucked up that it drives me back to smokin'.

Greenery....mmmmmmm. Just the taste would make me happy.

[bwind22]

Originally posted by Haunted
Greenery....mmmmmmm. Just the taste would make me happy.

Just the taste IS making me happy, right this very second as I type this. :D

[Haunted]

Haaaaaw thank-ee, thank-ee ver' much!

TEMPTER!!!

[The_Return]

Hmm...sounds like it could be OK. Not a big fan of pyschic kids myself, I find they're overused, but if it's done well, that could make for a pretty cool script! The ending is great!

[Kemal]

Sure, why not. If you feel the urge to write, then write. They've got software that helps you write in the screenplay format these days, Finaldraft or something like that.

[Haunted]

Really?

Here that Mr. Sadistro? I may be able to help with a screenplay after all.


Oh, and Kemal, I know I've said this before, but you really don't come around enough.

[AmericanManiac]

Originally posted by The_Return
Hmm...sounds like it could be OK. Not a big fan of pyschic kids myself, I find they're overused, but if it's done well, that could make for a pretty cool script! The ending is great!
I think the reason that it is over used is because the youngsters have the ability (esp. a girl) to connect with spirits (if you believe in them). That is why many people have problems, with ghost is because of their young childern. I read that in one of my ghost books that I own. Thanks to everyone that has replied, I figured I would get a bunch of negative feedback.

[Haunted]

Ghosts are cool.

[ItsAlive75]

Originally posted by Haunted
Ghosts are cool.

Ghosts are cool. I hope I have unfinished business when I die so I come back as a ghost. Then I'm just gonna hang around outside gas stations and just bother people.