Design Your Own Death

[FangoFan]

This is a good chance for anyone to be a killer.

I want this thread to be about horror fans creating their own death scene.

Please don't rip-off movie death scenes.
This is a good way to crack into the twisted heads of the horror.com members.

You don't have to tell the whole story. Just build up a scenario and write the death scene.

Here is an example of; My death scene:



Shaken from the voices and the madness in her tired head Marisa sat in the corner of the darkened room. She wept dryly, drummed her head against the wall, clutched her legs with a hug, and feared the shadows that we're clouding her mind.

She would have shivered from the cold wind that willowed from the open window but something kept her warm. Maybe it was her fear or perhaps the tears.

Marisa realized she was no longer a sleep. The nightmare she had just moments ago had waken her suddenly. But, now as she sits on the floor with her eyes clenched, being to frightened to open them, the nightmare is not gone.

The sickening distorting shadows. Their bodys like long dead men, their faces like nothing ever concieved of before. Their faces were difficult to detail, they were continuely shifting like images in a dark horizon.

Hard and heavy breathes release from Marisas gut. She decides to open eyes to stop the headache begining to numb her.

A few dangling tears drop from her lashes as her quivering lids struggle to part. Her breathing subsides, slightly. The shadows of long dead men fading from her awareness, and places her hands to her throbbing head before opening her eyes.

She's still against her bedroom wall, in the dark, and starting to feel the cold wind upon her.

She pushes herself to stand. Her knees wobble from the sudden pressure of posture.

Marisa looks all around her room. At her bed for warm comfort.

Marisas attention shifts when feeling a twitch in her head. It was a disturbing sensation like a pair of clawed icy hands rubbing at her brain.

And after Marisas one last breath the hands inside her head clap together smoothly. An eruption of brief pain as brain splatters in her skull, Marisa crumples lifeless to the floor.

[FairyKorpes]

*Walks in to local post office*

Me: Hello. I'd like to mail this parcel.

Clerk: *bang*

"Today a local woman was found shot in the head at a downtown post office. Paramedics say she was also not wearing clean underware as mother suggested"

Yes, i can see it now.

Sorry my imagination is has been on strike since '87.

[The STE]

*I'm sitting in my room eating sushi, crab legs, beef jerky and sirloin steak while watching my flat-panel widescreen plasma TV*

Me: (between bites) Boy, some fellatio sure would be nice by now

*Heather Brooke, Kobe Tai, Heather Hunter, Katie Morgan, and Gage come in*

Me: Huh. That usually doesn't work.

*They laugh and say I'm the funniest person ever. Then they fellate me to death*



I could have been woken up that day by getting a swift kick to the crotch by Low-Ki, and that'd still be a damn good day, even with the dying.

[AUSTIN316426808]

Originally posted by The STE
*I'm sitting in my room eating sushi, crab legs, beef jerky and sirloin steak while watching my flat-panel widescreen plasma TV*

Me: (between bites) Boy, some fellatio sure would be nice by now

*Heather Brooke, Kobe Tai, Heather Hunter, Katie Morgan, and Gage come in*

Me: Huh. That usually doesn't work.

*They laugh and say I'm the funniest person ever. Then they fellate me to death*



I could have been woken up that day by getting a swift kick to the crotch by Low-Ki, and that'd still be a damn good day, even with the dying.


What he said, except with Jennifer Connelly and Kate Blanchett.

[barbra]

Im in the womb, its warm, moist and maybe a bit sticky. I can see my fingers and toes and there is a sliver rod being shoved into my face. There is a light at the end of a tunnel and then all the fluid is gone and Im on a whirlwind adventure down a tube.

[AUSTIN316426808]

....

[barbra]

Originally posted by AUSTIN316426808
Alllllllllllllllllllllllllll Righty Then. I thought we had an understanding

[AUSTIN316426808]

Originally posted by barbra
I thought we had an understanding


sorry, it was kinda like a reflex.

[barbra]

Originally posted by AUSTIN316426808
sorry, it was kinda like a reflex. cool!

[kung-fu-jesus]

tom awakes with a serious head ache, hanging by his ankles with his arms tied behind his back.

a loud noise, the steel door in front of tom opens. a tall being dressed in black with a pale white blank mask enters.( he shall be called the mr. x)

mr. x draws a skinning knife from its sheve. he aproches tom. mr.x places the knife on toms left leg and slowly draws it down peeling skin away.

the screen goes black. tom is know totaly skinned, he is still alive.
mr. x pulls out a scalple. he then slowly slices toms bloody fleshy body. this continues for about 2 min.

mr. x then leaves the room. 1 min or 2 min passthen the door opens again. in run 3 german rotts. they begin to knaw on toms body( he is still alive). 2 mins of the eating pass when the door opens again and mr. x has a gasoline can. mr. x calls the dogs.

mr. x walks up and poors the gas on tom. he lights a match, ignites tom and walks away.

[barbra]

Originally posted by kung-fu-jesus
tom awakes with a serious head ache, hanging by his ankles with his arms tied behind his back.

a loud noise, the steel door in front of tom opens. a tall being dressed in black with a pale white blank mask enters.( he shall be called the mr. x)

mr. x draws a skinning knife from its sheve. he aproches tom. mr.x places the knife on toms left leg and slowly draws it down peeling skin away.

the screen goes black. tom is know totaly skinned, he is still alive.
mr. x pulls out a scalple. he then slowly slices toms bloody fleshy body. this continues for about 2 min.

mr. x then leaves the room. 1 min or 2 min passthen the door opens again. in run 3 german rotts. they begin to knaw on toms body( he is still alive). 2 mins of the eating pass when the door opens again and mr. x has a gasoline can. mr. x calls the dogs.

mr. x walks up and poors the gas on tom. he lights a match, ignites tom and walks away. yumm....
sushi, then bar-b-q!

[AUSTIN316426808]

Originally posted by kung-fu-jesus
tom awakes with a serious head ache, hanging by his ankles with his arms tied behind his back.

a loud noise, the steel door in front of tom opens. a tall being dressed in black with a pale white blank mask enters.( he shall be called the mr. x)

mr. x draws a skinning knife from its sheve. he aproches tom. mr.x places the knife on toms left leg and slowly draws it down peeling skin away.

the screen goes black. tom is know totaly skinned, he is still alive.
mr. x pulls out a scalple. he then slowly slices toms bloody fleshy body. this continues for about 2 min.

mr. x then leaves the room. 1 min or 2 min passthen the door opens again. in run 3 german rotts. they begin to knaw on toms body( he is still alive). 2 mins of the eating pass when the door opens again and mr. x has a gasoline can. mr. x calls the dogs.

mr. x walks up and poors the gas on tom. he lights a match, ignites tom and walks away.

damn dude, wtf is going on in your head lol.

[The STE]

Originally posted by AUSTIN316426808
What he said, except with Jennifer Connelly and Kate Blanchett.

Yeah, they may be a bit better to look at (MAYBE), but I know nothing of their fellatio abilities. The five I said I've SEEN them giving head and can vouch for their talent (Heather Brooke especially so)

[AUSTIN316426808]

Originally posted by The STE
Yeah, they may be a bit better to look at (MAYBE), but I know nothing of their fellatio abilities. The five I said I've SEEN them giving head and can vouch for their talent (Heather Brooke especially so)


I see your point(Heather Brooke especially)

[kung-fu-jesus]

tom awakes with a serious head ache, hanging by his ankles with his arms tied behind his back.

a loud noise, the steel door in front of tom opens. a tall being dressed in black with a pale white blank mask enters.( he shall be called the mr. x)

mr. x draws a skinning knife from its sheve. he aproches tom. mr.x places the knife on toms left leg and slowly draws it down peeling skin away.

the screen goes black. tom is know totaly skinned, he is still alive.
mr. x pulls out a scalple. he then slowly slices toms bloody fleshy body. this continues for about 2 min.

mr. x then leaves the room. 1 min or 2 min passthen the door opens again. in run 3 german rotts. they begin to knaw on toms body( he is still alive). 2 mins of the eating pass when the door opens again and mr. x has a gasoline can. mr. x calls the dogs.

mr. x walks up and poors the gas on tom. he lights a match, ignites tom and walks away.






i admit im a little fucked in the head, but i would love to see my creation of death in a film.

it would be extremly gory, i toned it down alot cause i was short on time. id have to film it myself.


ive got it ill film it and send into project greenlight as my short film. i wish i would have done it sooner so wes could see it, and fuck mirmax if they dont like it, deminsion and wes craven would love it.


i just copy and pasted cause i cant remember how to quote

[FairyKorpes]

Originally posted by The STE
*Then they fellate me to death*

That is the funniest sentance...ever! Fellate me ........:p

[The STE]

Originally posted by AUSTIN316426808
I see your point(Heather Brooke especially)

Nice to see someone besides me on this board watches her stuff

[ItsAlive75]

John sat on the wooden stool in the dimly lit basement, staring at the vice that was mounted on the workdesk. He ran his fingers over the rusted steel, flipping the crank and watching the vice expand.

"Come on, do it," the Devil said, standing over John. He patted John's shoulders with his long, black nails.

"I'm gonna, gimee a second."

John turned to crank until the vice was large enough to fit a human skull into. He swallowed a large bubble of saliva.

"Come on, let's go." The Devil was getting impatient. "I dare ya."

"You don't have to dare me, I'm gonna do it anyway."

The Devil clapped and giggled like small child as John fit his head into the vice, and gripped the crank as best he could with his hand.

"I... I can't."

"Oh, that's OK. Here, I'll help you out," the Devil said as he placed his hand over John's on the crank.

[The STE]

:confused:

[FangoFan]

Another death


One curious night a young man was tempted to dare the chance of walking into the supposedly abandoned house. A mile walk lead the man to a crumbled driveway. The narrow driveway was hugged by a dense woods. About 200 yards into the woods sets the abandoned house.

The man pulls out a flashlight as he gets to the front stone steps. He walks across the porch up to the front door. There is a window on each side of the door. The man looks through each window seeing nothing but black and still shadows.

He flicks his flashlight on, a beam of light hits the rough wooden door. He pushes into the door with his shoulder and slips inside. He falls to the floor, his body laying half in and half out of the house.

He picks himself up and brushes himself off. He sweeps the light across the front room. The room is bare of furnishings. The pungunt stench of something vile rests in the air and nearly doubles him over in nauseia.

The sharp sound of a womans cry of agony came. It made him tense up in fear. He thought to flee the house but decided to muscle it and search the house. The cry came once again. It seemed to come from the beneath the floorboards.

The sound was to real to be a ghost. So the man ran further into the house to find a way into the basement.

He walked down a hall and opened a door that opened to a descending stairway. The stairway had a small landing that turned left. He could see a faint glow of light.

The crys now are horrifying screams that pulse through the mans nerves.

The man went down the stairs carefully not to lose his balance. His adrenaline made him shake. As he got to the landing he could almost see the full sight.

A naked womans body was on a medical lab table strapped down and twitching violently in pain. A red blanket of blood was slick and sticky from the womans torso to her disfigured but once pretty head.

The man beside the lab table wearing a doctors coat and pair of bloody surgeons gloves pulled at the womans black and crimson hair. A sickening snapping sound came as the man pulled her head from her body.

The doc looked up at the man on the staircase and grinned. Carrying the womans head in one hand and a meat clever in the other he walked slowly toward the man on the stairs.

[ItsAlive75]

Why is he going to the house again?

[FangoFan]

Originally posted by ItsAlive75
Why is he going to the house again?


I don't know, I figured he has seen this house before or had heard rumors of it being haunted. So no one he knew has ever walked into the house 'cuz they've been chicken shit.

He thought the house was haunted he went out of curiosity to see if the rumors were true.

It's kind of a pretold notion I guess. 'Cuz the murdered woman and the man on the stairs would soon be the ghosts haunting the house.

And, perhaps this house was haunted by say evil spirits that drove the doctor guy crazy and caused his pshycoticness.

[ItsAlive75]

haha, is this still designing your own death or are we just makin' ghost stories now?

Cuz I'm down.

[FangoFan]

I meant for this thread for anyone to come up with there own death scenes.


By me say your own death scene I mean create a death scene on your own with your imagination

It doesn't have to be your death.

[kung-fu-jesus]

you shoot your self in the head after seeing trick or treat, open water, or playing night caster for xbox

[urgeok]

well, since the 'sexed to death' scenario has been taken, and lord knows i strive for origionality at all times :



At the managers meeting, the usual characters were winding things up by casually discussing their fellow employees. No, scratch that - their peons - their worker bees, their drones .. who exist solely to do their bidding - their slightest whim no matter how stupid or trivial.

"jesus christ did you see the tits on the McManus chick today ...
that bitch has been asking for it for months now ..."
"isn't she on your team bob ?"

"yeah she is .. i'm arranging a week long training session out of town in a month - see how she performs after a few drinks ...and a hint that her job might be on the line"

"she's the one that just got married, right ?"

"thats her ... to some loser pulling in 30 - 40 G's - I'm sure she'll welcome the change"

"give her one for me Bob .... say - did anyone here see survivor last night ?"

at which point I kick the door to the conference room open.
I pause and relish the visible emotional evolution of shock, then anger - quickly replaced by fear, when the twin belts of plastic explosives strapped to my chest register in their reptilian brains.

"hi fuckers, I have news" i say - as their eyes widen further.

One asshole manages to regain a small measure of composure :
"what the hell is the meaning of this Wilson ?" (not my real name)
"Are you mad ?"

"well, i gues i am you weasly little cocksucker" i reply to his fat ugly mug, "I just got the news today that I have incurable cancer running through my entire body, and i thought to myself, i could do this slowly and painfully, or I could go out in a bang- doing the world some good by taking a half dozen of you pieces of shit with me."

I wait for a half minute, savoring the smell of their fear ...

Guys as low as this must surely suspect that this could happen at any time, no ?
I mean, you can't steamroller through life crushing anything and anyone in your path and not ponder that sooner or later someone might want payback ?
Maybe not ... maybe they are incapable of this kind of rational thought.

"before anyone asks" i continue "yes, this is real. Most of it was stolen from a construction site, and the detonator is something i made using plans I found on the internet - while i was at work on your dime. you assholes"

"there's enough here to take out most of this side of the building so i sent the other employees out - meaning we have about 2 minutes more before the police get here ... so lets get this done"

So i sit on the arm of one of the fuckers chair .."you're lucky pal, you're at ground zero. you and i will be completely shredded .. unidentifable .. thats not so bad. But see that fuck at the end of the table?" I point to the fuck at the end of the table, "that fuck might lose his legs and arms ... probably his head ...he's going to leave one god awful looking corpse. They'll have to pick him up like shit on a shovel. That's appropriate dont you think ?"

And knowing my time was running out i say "well, thats it ... time to go" and I pull this pin and yell "BANG" at the top of my lungs....
simultaniously slamming the conference table top with my arm.

3 of them immediately piss their pants. Which is exactly what i wanted to see. And i wanted them to see that I saw.

So as the humiliation sets in, mingled with a look of relief, I softly but audibly say "bye you fuckers" and detonate for real.

[BoneSaw]

that was pretty damn good.

the first of the demon spawn had been the easiest. it was only a few days old, and hadnt even cried out when he plunged his holy blade through its body.
the next two, they were tougher. when he entered their cave they rose to their feet, using their demon magic to try and confuse him. but it hadnt worked. he charged forward, slashing the throat of the little one, its green blood burst forth,covering the front of his pants.
the bigger one tried to flank him. with one fierce blow, he plunged his blade through its skull, the tip protruding beneath its gaping maw. as he tried to remove it, the blade snapped off even with the handle. Damn it, he thought. but no matter, he still had enough of the holy dagger to finish the job.
as he approached the demon queens lair, the heavy wooden door burst open. it was the queen herself. she rushed toward him spewing forth an evil wailing. it was more of the demon magic. before she could enspell him, he swung the pommel of the magic blade and crashed it into her skull. the queen fell to the dungeon floor, and before she could move, he jumped on her. the man sent blow after blow down onto her head untill he was covered with her brains and gore.
Finally, the terror was over, the prophecy forfilled. he was triumphant. the village was free!!!!........But wait, what was that ringing filling his skull, driving him to the brink of madness.......It must be more of the demon magic, some sort of spell.........it was.........it was..........it was..........the alarm clock!
Oh thank God!!! damn that was a crazy dream. oh shit he was going to be late for work."honey would you make some coffee?" Honey.............HHHHHHOOOOONNNNNEEEEEYYYYY!!!!!

[Marroe]

these posts are all too long for me right now...*sleepy*
But the sexed to death thing might me fun.......

[barbra]

Originally posted by Marroe
these posts are all too long for me right now...*sleepy*
But the sexed to death thing might me fun....... *pets marroe*

[Marroe]

Originally posted by barbra
*pets marroe* finally someone....so far all I have had is a bite on the butt, and a few kisses

[kung-fu-jesus]

i still liked mine skinned then BBQ" and urgeoks the best