babygirl20
02-17-2005, 10:11 AM
i recently wrote this poem that is in the process of being published. I would like ya'lls opinions (good or bad) just be honest please.
DARK NIGHT
The wind blowing, howling. Whispers are ever so near. Your heart drops to your stomach, your mind feels with fear.
A tap on your window, a door coming unlocked. You try to keep it all out, but it can't be blocked.
As you shiver and shake, in your bed you lay. Praying and waiting for the light of day.
As you hear a dull moaning, your worst fears come true. The reapers by your bedside, steady pointing at you.
When you ask what he's came for, you hear his skin crack as he grins. As the dread feels your heart, you know it's your life he will win.
When they find you in the morning, cold where you lay. They know that there time will come, and the reaper will have them one day.
2/17/05
DARK NIGHT
The wind blowing, howling. Whispers are ever so near. Your heart drops to your stomach, your mind feels with fear.
A tap on your window, a door coming unlocked. You try to keep it all out, but it can't be blocked.
As you shiver and shake, in your bed you lay. Praying and waiting for the light of day.
As you hear a dull moaning, your worst fears come true. The reapers by your bedside, steady pointing at you.
When you ask what he's came for, you hear his skin crack as he grins. As the dread feels your heart, you know it's your life he will win.
When they find you in the morning, cold where you lay. They know that there time will come, and the reaper will have them one day.
2/17/05