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Its finally here.
Ive finally got my movie up on youtube. Its only around 3 minutes long, and its not even close to done. I was trying for a Maniac-type character study, where the serial killer writes down his thoughts, howver i havnt put any narration in yet, so there is practically no dialogue. The story doesnt go much of anywhere either, but its definetly pretty well done. Pay attention to the cinematography. I wrote, Directed, and edited, as well as did the majority of the effects in this. It's Called The Field Man, and i hope you like it. tell me what you think. by the way...TURN IT UP!!!!!!!!!!1
this movie is heavily ambient, and playing it loud will make the experience much better. consturctive critisism wanted...compliments also wanted. :) http://youtube.com/watch?v=mZkWx0I2cAU Last edited by The Mothman; 02-13-2007 at 06:13 AM. |
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The atmosphere you created was pretty effective for each of the scenes... liked the good use of ambient and natural light by the lake creating that eeriness, and the darkness in the shed, but still able to see whats going on. Nice gore effects too.
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Thanks for the compliments. That is actually the only footage we have so far, our main actor's schedule is packed, so we can only work with him a couple hours on Sundays.:( its a shame. he makes an awesome killer.
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pretty cool. can't wait to see the finished product.
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i left u a coment
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Thanks...im gonna try to upload my claymations to Youtube later aswell.
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id buy it.
though if you could incorperate weed in there somehow, you'd have gold. | ||||
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I think if you put money into it, the movie could become a big underground hit. You know because everyone would love to recommend a movie called "The Field Man"
horrible name btw haha anyway here's what I didn't like: actor playing the killer the only line in the movie so far is really bad editing transitions I was bored before the 3 minute mark, mainly because I couldn't force myself to believe I was watching some interesting psychopath. I still think it's one of the best amateur horror movies I've seen and you are pretty talented though. ;)
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i was thinking of calling it "love shack" one time.:p the main problem with it was that nothing was written down. I didnt know how to carry out the story, so each scene was just thought up of after the previous was completed. and you're right, trasnistions are probably the weakest part. we had lost bits and pieces of film due to camera problems, so the transition are pretty bad. Last edited by The Mothman; 02-14-2007 at 11:15 AM. |
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May I suggest a lesbian scene or two?
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