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Old 10-06-2010, 08:58 AM
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Is this all original work? Looks like "The Love Story of Ralph and Edna" circulated the eWorld a few years ago:

http://www.google.com/search?q=The+L...ient=firefox-a
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Old 10-06-2010, 10:07 AM
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Holy shit. Thank you Chrono. I was told that work was original by the girl that wrote it. She told me I could have it and use it for my shorts. Some ones got a beating coming to them.
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Old 10-18-2010, 06:29 AM
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In rural Wisconsin, there is an old abandoned park. Built in the 1920s, it served as the town's gathering place for everyone.

That is, until a newly developed Train and Tunnel for Tots™ ride was installed in 1932. It was an innocent looking childish train, with one main (mechanized) head car, with three small trolleys pulled behind it. It went around some loops before going into a small tunnel.

But this is where the story gets weird. There were numerous cases of child deaths that year, all of them happening after the child rode on that train system. Some kids went missing in that short tunnel (about ten feet), and others went comatose after leaving. Some killed themselves by scratching at their throats until they bled out, and one of them even killed another child before hanging herself with razor wire at the family's farm.

The park was closed, and the town's popularity as a tourist town plummeted.

Recently, a team of scientists were sent out to the park. They taped a video camera to the train, and put a new intern in with it, before sending it on its way onto the tracks.

When the train left the tunnel, it was empty, except for the camera.

The last ten seconds were nothing but static, save for the sound of children laughing.
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Old 10-18-2010, 08:00 AM
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Are you just pulling this stuff from creepypasta.com? o.O

http://www.creepypasta.com/tourist-trap/

http://www.google.com/search?q=Train...d0bccbc44b8016
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Old 10-18-2010, 12:44 PM
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Nope. Im just going through my archive of stories. Some mine some from pals.
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Old 10-19-2010, 12:02 PM
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"Pals" meaning "The Interweb"?

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