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Old 10-12-2003, 11:11 AM
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question about a movie i wrote called drake

tell me if u like the idea
it is about a man hoo has been cursed by the devil everything with the curse depends on what he did while he was alive he wood kill people by burning them or chopping them up after he kills a certain amout of people he would get a certain amount of people
after curse
he has claws that can catch on fire
he can only kill u wen u r alone
the more he kills he gets better ex.bigger claws,wings
if u kill him hell coemback 3 years later
(this will be 10 parts if i feel like it i will make 11 and 12)
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Old 10-12-2003, 11:19 AM
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hhhmmmmm...
have u been thinking of this idea 4 a while??
sounds like you just made it up then..
needs a bit more of an explaination.

What do you mean... "everything with the curse depends on what he did while he was alive"...
Why is it 10 a part?

sorry dude, but that sound pretty crap 2 me...
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Old 10-12-2003, 11:42 AM
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you are going to have to explain this a bit more... because I am not getting it..
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Old 11-10-2003, 03:01 PM
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Doesn't sound that good to me. Why can he only kill people when they are alone?:confused:
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Old 11-10-2003, 03:52 PM
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well the curse depends on real life when he killed people he wood throw his other victims in the closet then after he killed them hed reach in the closet and grab another person then kill them
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Old 11-11-2003, 01:56 AM
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Sounds like you need to elaberate more..Im confussed..why would he throw them in a closet...What kinda curse is it? Is he cursed after he died..because you said when he was alive... Maybe it looks better on paper in it's entirety(sp?)
Keep working at it...Just my opinion
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Old 11-11-2003, 05:58 AM
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I agree with the consensus. Althoug it does appear you have some great idea in mind, you are not expressing it enough through this forum for anyone to really get excited about it.

Also, a serial killer with claw-like hands who dies but comes back from hell to continue killing...this story has been done before. His name was Fredrick E. Krueger.
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