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dark, horror poetry
i wanted to submit my book of evil/weird poetry for your perusal. please help me destroy reality...
http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=198794 thank you, Darrick
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ok, here I go:
you should get a new preview poem because "Clocks Are Melting Darkly" is really an good poem... for older guys obsessed with only fucking virgin teen chickies. its called sagatary rape, and 30-whatever- year olds do not appeal to 15/16 year old girls... usually (and I'm sure they wouldn't be virgins). I am tempted to buy one of the books though. I love poetry, and I am curious to read more. As long as I'm not desturbed as to think that some guy who is almost old enough to be my dad would want to fuck me just because I'm not loose. That I find disgusting. But I can see how Its horror. lol. The pic was a nice touch.... sorta. and I could go on all night but I must go, so yeah. You have potential. Keep up the good work! :D
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Statutory rape is underaged sex. Quote:
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i hate to be mean, but i read the sample poem and it seemed trite and forced into a rhyme scheme. . .
forgive an honest opinion
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