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I like it. Easy to read, realistic expletive dialogue. :D Very scary/climactic ending.
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That was great!! I wasnt planning on reading it all now....but t just sucks you in!
I love the Romero tribute, btw.
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Quote:
I stand by my excessive use of profanity. they are a bunch of scared southerners during a... well, you know if youve read it ;) Quote:
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:D
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I loved what I read... got booted in the middle of reading it... I love the use of "bad language" lol....
I honestly think it would make a kickass movie! You should submit some of your work to SCI-FI.... they make some great movies! one of my fave was Dog Soldiers! Keep up the good work!!! Like you won't!! lol the Lady Mary
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WEIRD coincidence.....
For one, i love dog soldiers (it's not really a sci fi channel movie, it's just the only place you can see it in this country without buying the dvd, which i suggest you do if you have only ever seen it on tv) the real coinky dinkY? I submitted this story to sci-fi.com, and was rejected :D I didnt really expect to get published there, but it was worth a try :)
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Just read this again...still awesome:)
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Why thank you :)
I need to get off my ass and finish some of the other ones im writing. I have some really weird, original stuff coming down the pipe, plus a re-write of Justice.
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Shameless Self Promotion™
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hee hee.....damn you're tenacious.
hey........TENACIOUS V |
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