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 "We shall swim out to that brooding reef in the sea and dive down through black abysses to Cyclopean and many-columned Y’ha-nthlei, and in that lair of the Deep Ones we shall dwell amidst wonder and glory forever." Last edited by _____V_____; 11-05-2009 at 08:38 AM. 
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Just finished reading the last 2 chapters....sorry for this delayed response FC.
I think this is the best ending you have written so far in here and that's a clear sign of your fantastic level of improvement for sure. Truly enjoyed every bit of it. Action, humor, emotion nonetheless the characters & their developments all parts are top notch. Wish you again all the best in your future creative works and eager to see frequently more that in HDC. 
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Thanks very much Roshiq! It took two hours of on and off writing to get the ending just the way I wanted it, so I'm really glad that you feel that way about it. I hope that you continue to read just as much as I continue to write!
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Oh WOW!!!
I just now (well, right before I started reading it  ) noticed this, and realized that it was new...It is INCREDIBLE!Umm...How many times have you killed us now?  Seriously, of all your stories, I believe this is my favorite so far...I am SO glad that I didn't overlook it...I'm gonna make sure that Dustin reads it as soon as he gets a chance Thanks so much for writing these for all of us...
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And thankyou so much for reading! I really enjoyed writing this one. It might be because it was updated daily but I felt very connected to this one and it seemed to flow very well.
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