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Old 04-01-2010, 07:31 PM
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The Belmont Park Horror

After a long night of partying, Nevaeh,her friends and her baby sister decided to go to the park just to chill. they sat on the park bench laughing and thats when they were approached by two tall men decked out in black. With knives in each hand. Nevaeh and her friends froze. They couldn't believe that in less than minute, they all could be dead. That is, if they didn't run. They all got up running in different directions. It was six of them ( Esme, Alexis, Rob, Amelia, Rory and Nevaeh.)
The first to go was Amelia. She was running but suddenly tripped over a rock and fell. One of the men stood over her as she tried, stooped down and started stabbing her. She was stabbed at least twenty time. She died. Next was Alexis. She ran behind the tree, hiding and praying that one of the men wouldn't find her. She felt someone tap her on her shoulder. She turned around and saw the man. He stabbed her seven times but she didnt die. Next victim was Rory. He ran to the police post that was inside the park. No one was in there. He tried to call for help but the line was dead. Then he looked on the floor and noticed a shadow. He turned around and saw one of them. The man then held his head back and slit his throat. The man then decided to finish off the job by cutting Rory's head off his body. The job was done.
Next, Esme. She ran all the way to the entrance of the park. Just as was almost at the gate, one of the men stood at the gate. She stopped running abrutly. The man threw the knife and it struck her right in the head. She didnt make it. Next in line was Rob. He ran into the storage room. He looked out the window and saw his friends' bodies lying dead on the floor. Then....he heard shuffling. He looked around and it stopped. There was silence. He then took one look to the right......one to the left.......then Boom ! The man struck him in the chest with an axe. He was gone.
Last was Nevaeh. She was hiding underneath a chair. She was looking around and she saw her sister Alexis limping and crying. She ran to her and started to calm her down. The two then managed to run out of the park and got home. But the question still remains.......who were those mistery men and why did they kill those kids ??
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Old 04-01-2010, 09:52 PM
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It was the one armed man.



Or the butler.





Wait... did the killer look monkey-like? If so, I have an idea.
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Old 04-02-2010, 02:25 AM
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not me - i'd just shoot the annoying little punks (less effort)
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