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Old 02-21-2012, 07:55 PM
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Hi Guys!

After hours of hard-work I finally made a horror short and wanted to share with you guys :-)

Hope whoever watches it likes what they see!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Naiq0QwOfIg

Thanks in advance
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Old 02-21-2012, 11:03 PM
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Holy crap! This is REALLY well done. The sense of atmosphere you create, the tight, suspenseful direction, errie music, muted color scheme... even the acting is good.

The one minor criticism I have is the phone ringing is too loud at the beginning.

I'm glad to see the last credit at the end- because I'm ready to watch more!
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Old 02-22-2012, 06:05 AM
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Agree with NE. Particularly the sound mixing worked out pretty effectively. And the final...the ghost in the shower scene was great. A really impressive effort indeed. Keep up the good work.

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Old 02-22-2012, 08:42 AM
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Agree with the other comments, this was really entertaining. Watched your other videos too. The parody advertisment was hilarious and really well acted, although I didnt understand a word. :o

Nice work, good luck!
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Old 02-22-2012, 09:50 AM
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Thanks so much guys for watching it and having the patience to write something constructive! :-)
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Old 02-22-2012, 11:49 AM
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I'll echo my compadres....nice work
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