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Old 09-17-2004, 07:04 PM
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I like it. Easy to read, realistic expletive dialogue. :D Very scary/climactic ending.
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Old 09-17-2004, 08:00 PM
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That was great!! I wasnt planning on reading it all now....but t just sucks you in!


I love the Romero tribute, btw.
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I like it. Easy to read, realistic expletive dialogue. :D Very scary/climactic ending.
Thanks :) My woman is riding me to submit it to the Sci-Fi channel's web page for publishing (good girl ;)) but weasnt sure if they would accept something with so much swearing.

I stand by my excessive use of profanity. they are a bunch of scared southerners during a... well, you know if youve read it ;)

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That was great!! I wasnt planning on reading it all now....but t just sucks you in!


I love the Romero tribute, btw.
Thanks :D its a tad derivative, but i thought it was appropriate :)
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I loved what I read... got booted in the middle of reading it... I love the use of "bad language" lol....

I honestly think it would make a kickass movie! You should submit some of your work to SCI-FI.... they make some great movies! one of my fave was Dog Soldiers!

Keep up the good work!!! Like you won't!! lol

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WEIRD coincidence.....

For one, i love dog soldiers (it's not really a sci fi channel movie, it's just the only place you can see it in this country without buying the dvd, which i suggest you do if you have only ever seen it on tv)


the real coinky dinkY?


I submitted this story to sci-fi.com, and was rejected :D

I didnt really expect to get published there, but it was worth a try :)
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Just read this again...still awesome:)
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Why thank you :)

I need to get off my ass and finish some of the other ones im writing. I have some really weird, original stuff coming down the pipe, plus a re-write of Justice.
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