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Tick tock, Mr V...
*Bond Villain Voice* ... (also imagine me swinging a pocket watch menacingly) |
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THE SECOND TEST OF HDC IDOL II - THE GOBLINS Out of the 10 listed famous writers, choose a writer and a short story written by him/her of your choice, and turn it into a movie adaptation, making necessary script/screenplay changes so that the movie appeals to wider audiences worldwide:- M.R. James, Ramsey Campbell, Ambrose Bierce, Algernon Blackwood, Robert E. Howard, Walter de la Mare, Sheridan Le Fanu, E. Nesbit, Henry James and Marjorie Bowen. The Villain's entry - Quote:
(TBC...)
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Overall Grade - C
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Chronogrl's entry -
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(TBC...)
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(tbc.....)
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Overall Grade - B (Note to Chrono - Boy, you used a lot of formatting in your entry! Hope I covered all of them adequately and didn't miss anything. :))
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Judges - Thank you SO MUCH for taking the time to read my entry - It was really long-winded (once I started, I couldn't stop!), so I appreciate your time and consideration.
Judge #3 - I really appreciate your feedback - Totally get you with the voiceover; I struggled with it - Wasn't sure if it was a wise choice, though I just couldn't get Jim Carrey's mumbling voiceover out of my head from Eternal Sunshine - I really liked how that was executed... But, ultimately, I agree with you... I cite Black Swan, but Portman's performance warrants no voiceover, it's so incredibly strong... Plus OH MY GOD I CAN'T BELIEVE I FORGOT ABOUT SPIDER! That's a very apt comparison and - you're right - That style is close to what I'm trying to accomplish here with the Reality vs. Paranoid Narrator (and MAN - Ralph Finnes - What a performance!). Re: Quote:
In terms of the children - I like the idea of them being these all-important entities that are ultimately off-scene. That is how their presence is in the story, and I like them on the outskirts - It's more about Lindsay's obsession over them, and not necessarily their actual characters... Hope that makes sense. ;) I understand your critique, but just wanted to give the thought behind it - Their omission is purposeful because I wanted it to be more about Lindsay - I do think that they could be more present, though - Timing and pace is hard to convey in a treatment, so I think that they could be a lot more present toward the beginning of the movie. V - Thanks for posting - I know my enhanced text can be a pain, but it looks perfect. ;) Also - This challenge served as my introduction to Ramsey Campbell - I actually purchased his short story collection Alone with the Horrors: The Great Short Fiction of Ramsey Campbell 1961-1991 for the purpose of this challenge... I'm really looking forward to reading his other works - Thanks for bringing him to my attention! Last edited by ChronoGrl; 09-13-2011 at 07:26 AM. |
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Just wanted to say, I am loving reading peoples work. I think the time and effort you have all put in is amazing. I'm sure its not easy putting your ideas out there to be critiqued, even in an informal setting like HDC.
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Whew i was expecting worse from the judges. What everyone said i actually expected to hear. I had a lot of trouble with this challenge and didnt have much time to do it in. Hopefully ill do better with the next one.
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THE SECOND TEST OF HDC IDOL II - THE OGRES I am here to address the Ogres. Each one of you will be given a task which you have to perform to the best of your ability, wit and understanding , based upon the knowledge you have of the genre. For this first task, the common theme I have chosen is - A TO Z STORY. Here is your task, Ogres - Write a short horror story in about 200 words, using words starting from A to Z in the story (at least once). Please note that no alphabet should be left out. So Ogres - Despare, Roshiq, Zombieness, Leezuki and Horrorzack - put your thinking caps on and get creative. Once you are finished, please PM your entry to me, or send it via email to [email protected]. Do NOT post your entry directly in this thread. You all have 96 hours, starting from NOW! All the best!
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