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Old 04-20-2011, 12:45 PM
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Two grave robbers discover too late that what lurks beneath the surface of a casket is not something they should have disturbed.

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Old 04-20-2011, 07:10 PM
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Good Charactarization and the concept is interesting but you might want to do some proof reading over it and polish it up some. Especially that last page. Good job.
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Old 04-22-2011, 08:11 AM
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I could not get into the site where your story is posted, do you have it posted anywhere else?
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