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New online story: Gloom
Incase anyone is interested, i have posted the prelude to a dark fantasy story on my site here:
http://www.vodstok.net/gloom/ let me know what you think of the openeing. there is a lot planned for this, and the more feedback i get, the faster it will be done, so let me know what you think . :)
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Awww, c'mon. Don't make me beg. If you hate it, I'll refund your money ;)
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I really liked it. Made me want to read more so I guess it's working so far. It's very very H.G. Wells, which is a good thing!
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cool, thanks :). It's a work in progress, I'm hoping to add new chapters every couple of weeks. :)
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Im a dork , i know. Humor me and read it.
Please.:)
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Very sci-fi-ish. I like it, can't wait to read the other chapters and to see what the graphics look like. Nice imagery and use of words as well.
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I Like It :D not Perfect yet ..but your getting there ...Reminds me a bit of HP LOVECRAFT - Which is a Very Good Thing ;) !!
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lovecraft? you flatte rme. He is the only "horror" i ever really read. Thanks :) I actually wenty for his level of description when writing it so you have no idea how good a compliment that is :D
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:D I can't wait to read the next Chapter .
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