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03-17-2015, 11:49 AM
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The moon rises. The hunt begins. "Attractions" by NoahCopley
Hey there,
I've written this short horror story called "Attractions". I would love to hear what you think about it! It's free to read here: http://www.inkitt.com/stories/10268 Looking forward to hear from you! 
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03-17-2015, 12:01 PM
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Just read it. I liked it mostly. It was incredibly detailed but I thought almost to much at points. None specifically but maybe reel in a little bit of the descriptive bits. I love it when a story paints a picture of whats going on but if the picture is painted to finely it loses my attention. That would be my only critique. Otherwise it was fun and attractive... (see what I did there?) You might not get a whole ton of reviews through here but I will read anything you write and let you know what I think. I love this stuff.
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03-17-2015, 06:55 PM
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03-17-2015, 06:59 PM
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I'm not sure what that has to do with anything other than its the funniest picture I've seen in forever.
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