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01-03-2008, 12:46 PM
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"The Church of Fiends"
I am working on my own internet horror series tentatively titled "The Church of Fiends".
Here is an extract from the opening episode for you to read and comment upon. FADE IN: EXT. CHURCHYARD - DAY It is snowing heavily. The churchyard is covered in the stuff. Various tombstones stick out from under the white blanket at odd angles. The ancient wooden door leading into the church slides open and a bizarre looking midget dressed in rags emerges from the building. He is HECTOR. HECTOR Fucking snow. Hector wraps his rags tight around his body and slams the door shut behind him. He makes his way outside. CUT TO: EXT. CHURCHYARD - MOMENTS LATER Behind the church, Hector continues moving quickly through the snow, grunting as he does so. He eventually reaches a small gate in the wooden wall which he opens. Moving through into a snow-covered orchard, Hector smiles and approaches a small stone plaque which sits on the ground in a clearing, half covered in snow. Hector slides snow from the surface of the stone and grins. He stands, and removes his bitter, rotten penis from his clothes. He begins to urinate over the stone. HECTOR Oh Mistress! Come now from the darkness and be one with me! A hand reaches up from the ground and grabs the stone. The great witch BETHELDA emerges and smiles at Hector. BETHELDA You did your job well, midget. HECTOR Do I get my reward? Hector grins. BETHELDA I suppose. CUT TO: INT. CHURCH- HECTOR'S OFFICE In one of the main office’s in the church, a bizarre scene takes place. Hector stands on a wooden chair and MAKES LOVE to the witch Bethelda from behind. She looks back at him and smiles, then turns away and sighs unhappily. Looking out of the window, Bethelda spots something moving in the orchard beyond the churchyard. BETHELDA Hector! Hector ignores the witch, and continues to thrust himself deep inside of her. BETHELDA (CONT'D) Hector you stupid dwarf! There’s someone in the orchard! HECTOR Wah...? BETHELDA I just saw someone moving around in the sacred orchard... go knife them Hector! Hector nods and jumps down from the chair. As Bethelda pulls his underpants up, Hector grabs a large, rusty knife from the table and makes his way out of the room. 
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01-03-2008, 01:47 PM
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you lost me at "a bizarre looking midget dressed in rags"
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"Little, vicious minds abound with anger and revenge, and are incapable of feeling the pleasure of forgiving their enemies." Earl of Chesterfield "A man that studieth revenge keeps his own wounds green, which otherwise would heal and do well." Francis Bacon
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01-03-2008, 04:18 PM
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Pornos have scripts?
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