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02-11-2005, 05:29 AM
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i think it would be better if u saved the haircut surprise till the end
as in, u make it sound like something real shitty is abou to happen, then it turns out its just a fuckin haircut kapiche? capeesh?
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ya that would be funny. I'm not very good at writing stories. btw this is my first horror story. except for the exception of a few telly tuby cult stories. I could post those itf you want.
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i think it takes alot to even come up with somet hing!
as for ur writing, that can be honed as u go. first u write, then afterward is when u go through and fix it up post whatever u want!!! :)
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thnx 4 ur support:D you can read my telly tubby exploitation thread in the general discussion. is up now.
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