here is some more of my loving..........

[h0rr0rdiva]

Originally posted by trippin_the_rif
That was pretty damn good. Not for a horror forum, but pretty damn good none the less.:)

Well thank you very much, I get embarassed easily, so that's why I didn't do more. But as I said it was a while Back, so I have none that are "Horrorific" yet. lol :D

[bloodrayne]

Dark Angel

Out of the deepest darkness,
A magnificent creature appeared,
He approached through swirling gray mist,
Awakening my curiosity and fear

I stood still, watching and waiting,
Pondering his malevolent intentions,
Intrigued and nervously anticipating,
The revelation of this dark apparition

Slowly and silently, he came to me,
As black clouds swiftly crossed the sky,
Soft echoes whispered, "Eternity",
All around me, and inside my mind

Confusion overwhelmed me,
Was this a nightmare or a dream?
I was unable to think clearly,
Should I sigh or should I scream?

Soon he was in front of me,
I was able to look into his eyes,
They were black, but not empty,
My reflection was inside

Slowly, he spread his huge, black wings,
Raising them high into the night sky,
In his chest, something red, and glowing,
Was the only part of him that seemed alive

In the darkness, its brilliance nearly made me blind,
I thought that it may have been blood or fire,
With a black twisted claw, he reached inside,
As if he knew, what my mind had inquired

He removed the object, without a word being spoken,
It was so bright that I could see, what I couldn't see before,
That this amazingly powerful being was broken,
A beautiful face, filled with pain, Impressive wings tattered and torn

Without ever speaking, he made me understand,
Everything suddenly became clear in my mind,
As he placed his still-beating heart in my hands,
I knew that this dark angel, was forever mine

[The STE]

Ok, here's some of MY loving...




THE REST OF THIS POST HAS BEEN DELETED DUE TO WRONG.
-THE INTERNET

[bloodrayne]

Bittersweet Contradiction

Heart so big, yet faith so small,
You can't love yourself at all

So delicate and fragile, yet impossible to break,
You overcome each setback, with strength you think you fake

You radiate a heavenly glow, as bright as the fires of hell,
Your burning brilliance makes me shiver, like winter's coldest spell

Deepest darkness lights up your soul,
What tears you apart, makes you whole

So much pleasure in your pain,
You hurt yourself just to stay sane

You find serenity in your strife,
Each death inside you, brings new life

You find comfort in cold rain,
You revel in your deep disdain

So much hatred for yourself,
Yet, you love like no one else

Wicked thoughts bound by sweet mercy,
You could kill me, but you can't hurt me

My heart whispers with conviction,
It's calling you, my bittersweet contradiction

[AUSTIN316426808]

Originally posted by Angra
No. You sound like Eminem, yo.

Does it worry anyone else that there's no link to that picture?

[scaryminda15]

yay you liked it dante! great poems you guys. i love simon cowell he speaks the truth.

[Angra]

Originally posted by scaryminda15
yay you liked it dante! great poems you guys. i love simon cowell he speaks the truth.

Amen, Halleluja!!

[scaryminda15]

lol angra you kill me, ( no put down the knife it was expression) lol :) The STE i am eager to know what you work that was so bad.
ok here is another loving poem......


i am sitting here thinking of the time
wondering if i have time to think or is it all work
i cant stop thinking of him for he broke my heart
is this my life?
i ask myself everyday wondering if it could be answered
who am i?
i ask myself sometimes so now i am pondering
i am waiting for these questions to be answered
i think of my past as i cut a apple with a knife
am i adopted?
this question is everyone thinks about at one time or another
but for me i dont know the answer
i feel like i dont belong, who am i?
is my real name of a different origin?
or is my family richer than mine at the moment of this peom?
all this questions but who will answer?
will i even know?
how am i surposed to know ?
and how are u surposed to know?

as i am sitting here thinking of the time
whe i am here pondering of the time i was loved
but people say that i am still loved
but how is this true i ask you?
do you know and if you dont who does?

i feel like a criminal
but i have done nothing wrong
will someone give me a sign or a symbol
i will wait for the answer unitl u here the funeral bells going ding dong ding dong
but maybe i am just making this up or maybe i am not
who can tell
but please dont
tell me a false answer for i can well
if i dont know but i will always think of the question that could have been answered
ok so i must be off
ill sit here till the bell rings and the cat has purred
so good bye

[Posher778]

Originally posted by Angra
No. You sound like Eminem, yo.

I love the fact that this was the first time EVER that you've spoken to me. hah. I didn't mean the poem was bad, just her rhyme scheme.

[Angra]

Originally posted by Posher778
I love the fact that this was the first time EVER that you've spoken to me. hah. I didn't mean the poem was bad, just her rhyme scheme.

EVER??

Dude, you registered less than 3 months ago!!!






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