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Originally posted by bloodcreature
I liked the concept. But not to be mean, it was a little confusing and I think more details would clear it up.
I enjoyed reading it though, it had me wondering through out what was going to happen.
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Thats what I was going for man, so no offence taken at all. I didnt want to make everything perfectly clear.
It was kind of cool...I originall wrote this story for a school project. For bonus marks, we were aloud to read our stories in front of the class. Well being the actor that I am, I naturally toook that oportunity. The cool part is that after class people came up to me with theories and ideas that Id never even thought of...really cool, at least I thought so.