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Old 07-24-2020, 06:00 AM
dougbwill dougbwill is offline
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Join Date: Jul 2020
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Originally Posted by SlayerX View Post
Morning,

I subbed to your channel

I really liked for a short the premises and can easily see it been made it something more fleshed out.

If I had to provide any constructive feedback it would be the narration is good but is missing something not sure what.

If you check out Rob Gavagan on Youtube he nails it.

I'm not saying its bad but with a slight change in tone it could be even better.

I'll continue to watch your videos :)
Thank you very much for the sub! I really do appreciate it!
And thank you for the feedback as well! I was thinking the same thing about the narration. I keep going back and forth as to keep the narrations or not. I did check out Rob Gavagan, thanks for the suggestion, and he is pretty great. I think will try to adopt his tone.
Thanks again for watching, I really appreciate you taking the time to do so!
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