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Originally Posted by Morningriser
Just to clarify to everyone else so I don't sound like a complete fucking asshole, he messaged me earlier and asked me to critique his story.
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And I want to clarify to everyone that I welcome any healthy criticism to what I've written so maybe I can improve the next time I try to write something.
I didn't expect this to be perfect because it was very rushed. I think I could do a lot better if I actually took time to plan a story.