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Old 02-07-2009, 09:13 AM
FearKross FearKross is offline
Scares Little Kids
 
Join Date: Feb 2009
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I wrote a story...wut do u think about it?

Chapter ONE

It was about 6:00 o' clock in the morning and work was at seven thirty. Today was going to be a hrad day at work. I knew for a fact it would be. All the advertrisments on TV that we have put out is going to keep the emails and phone calls coming. I work for Microsoft, you get about 20,000 emails every 3 months and with numerous of computer problems. I work hard all day and night, some times I stay up for days without going home to rest my head upon my pillow I call hell. It's really starnge how I am one of the only people who work as hard as I do. I know a few people who get up at 5:00 and be to work by around 5:45. They say it's better but I was never an early bird like that. Even though phone calls are easier to take because you just explain it once BUT, emails are different. You get about 500 emails a day with about 2,000 reports per person. It's a stressful job and is on the very top of the list for the 'Extreme Jobs' placed at #1.
I got up and brushed my teeth and brew my fresh spot of tea and opened my window to smell the wonderful cedar wood. It smells as if the day was new and the earth turned away from sin and let the world shine.
I live in a small town in Utah. Amazing views. You can see wonderful green grass, beautiful smells of freshness, Mountains that go on for miles, and nice lakes. It snows constantly in the winter and as well as the fall. Every now and then, you can see some left over snow in the spring. It's so peaceful here.

I drank my tea and started to get ready for the day such as a little touch of cologhn, teeth brushing, clothing, and hair slicked back. Im a big buisness man.
My name. My name is Jack. Plain old jack. I don't have a last or middle name. Just Jack. After I was done getting ready I picked up my car keys and got in my car for work. I opened the garage and and started to pull out. Wait...
Ahh its proboly nothing.


Authors Commentary:

I know its starting off slow as every story does but its a horror so it won't take too long. If you would like to read the full version for free then please email me at: [email protected]

More chapters are coming soon.
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