13th asylum
I myself rate this about a 5/10. If I would rewrite it would be alot more graphic and descriptive and I'm sure alot longer, with probably more backstory. Kind of wrote it when I was messing with blender making 3d computer characters, thinking I could make a game all by myself. LOL yeah I did:rolleyes: that some how didn't work out and I never got back to this. But it was still fun. Would definitely suggest if your willing to read this to go instead to the SCRIPT for H3.
introduction:
This my first fictional story, inspired by a misspent youth, full of years and years, hours and hours of video games and movies. With the plot inspired by the video games resident evil, silent hill, max payne, and a small bit of the suffering mixed into one. The title refers to the thirteen colonies that colonized the united states and the madhouse that has now insued and my insane fictional idea of their solution to the madness. It tells the epic story of a man, who has lost everything, including who he himself, truly is. With the government losing order, and their supporters they try to gain complete control over everyone. The government hatches a plot, thinking that in the end, it will make things better. Soon to find, that it was not one of their best ideas, and that they had unleashed, an unimaginable horror upon everyone including them selves. It all begins when one man stands against them, and when things seem to be as bad, as they can get; things just seem to continue getting worse, and worse. Which end up leading to an epic night, of gruesome horrors with the main character and his newly acquired companion fighting for their lives, just trying to survive the night? In, which it encounters, a climactic and sudden end. Enjoy!
Chapter 1: Massacre
its 2012 and his name is mike loomis, and this is his nightmare. It all began when michaels life began falling apart. The world has been corrupted by greed and a hypocritical government that controls and manipulates the citizens lives at their discretion, and michael is the only one that sees it, and try’s to stand up against it; and the government feels michael needs to pay for it, but michael won't go down without a fight. If he only knew, how dark it really was going to become. Michael might have just accepted his life the way it was, even after he had lost everything. It all began on the night of june 28, michael came home from a long day at work, were he is a correctional officer at the state prison. Michael arrives in front of his house, to find the front door wide open, with the framing of the door cracked and busted, with pieces of the framing splintered, and laying all over the floor. Michael rushes into the house running up the stairs, screaming for his wife and daughter, hoping that nothing has happened to them. Michael opens the door to the master bedroom and there is no sight of his family. As michael walks down the hall toward his daughters room, one of his daughters toys that her voice is recorded on, begins going off. Saying, "i love my daddy" "i love my daddy"(repeating) as it ominously fades out, with a robotic tone getting deeper, as the battery dies. An eerie feeling rushes through michael, sending chills up his spine. Michael opens the door slowly, and finds his wife and daughter lying in pools of blood, with gun shots to their heads. Michael falls to his knees holding his lifeless family in his arms, crying and letting out a blood curdling scream. Consumed and blinded by the emotions running through him, michael failed to realize that the intruder was still in the room with him. As the intruder comes out from behind the door; with michaels back turned, the intruder comes up from behind; michael turns his head to see him, but it is too late, he strikes michael in the side of the jaw with a swift blow , braking michaels jaw , and knocking him unconscious, and that is when the real nightmare begins. Michael awakens in a dark room lying in a hospital bed 7 months later with his face wrapped in gauze, and his left hand, handcuffed to the rail of the bed, with no memory of what had happened, or of his life before the incident. A nurse walks into the room, michael begins trying to speak, to get the nurses attention, only to find that he cannot, because the immense pain in his jaw. "groaning" the nurse jumps, shocked to find that michael has awoken from his coma. The nurse runs out of the room and calls the police, letting them know michael has came to. The nurse comes back in the room and begins tending to michael, he finally manages to fight through the pain in his jaw, and asks the nurse, “what happened to me”? She hesitates, and says “i cannot talk about everything” ”, right know” ”, “but you are recovering from a gunshot wound to your head” “, and you have had multiple surgeries to repair your jaw” ”, from the damage caused” ”, and also from the removal process of the bullet fragments”. “ we were not able to remove a few fragments from your brain” “, so you will probably suffer from migraines’ and lapses of memory”. “we drained the blood that was on your brain” “, and left a part of your skull removed for a several days until the swelling of your brain resided”. “it truly is a miracle that you are alive”, and as she says that, the police come in. The nurse unwraps the bandages from michaels head, and hands him a mirror. Michael is in horror, to find his face horribly disfigured. His head is shaved, with two huge scars, with one leading from his right cheek, all the way down past the ridge of his jaw, and underneath his chin; and the other huge scar on the left side of the top of his head, that stretches from the front of his hairline, to the back of his head. The police then unlock michaels handcuffs and asks michael, if he thinks that he can walk, michael gives the police a nod letting them know, that he believes he can. The police then cover michaels head in a dark cloak, fearing that the bright lights of the outside might cause michael to have a seizure. As they lift michael out of the bed, they handcuff his hands behind his back, and escort him out of the hospital and down to the station. When the police remove the cloak from his face, michael finds himself in an interrogation room, with a dim light in the corner. Confused and curious as to why he is here, michael asks the detective; "what am i doing here” “, and what has happened”? The man starts with, "well im detective jacobs and you can stop pretending like you don't know what happened”. “you killed your wife and daughter, and failed at killing yourself”, and all of a sudden memories of michaels family come rushing back in, an overwhelming feeling of emotions take over, bursting into tears; michael says, "my family is dead”, “i couldn’t have”, “i wouldn’t have”. The detective butts in, and says well, "we have a cell for you and you'll see the judge tomorrow” “, but i don't remember anything your talking about,” michael explains! With that, they escort michael to his cell. The next day, michael sees the judge after meeting with his lawyer, that has informed him, that when the police arrived at michaels house, they found him in his daughter's bedroom, with both; his wife and daughter shot in their heads, and michael suffering from a gunshot wound underneath his chin, with the weapon in his hand. The lawyer has told michael that his only hope of avoiding the death penalty, is to plead insanity; michaels lawyer has told him, since he has no memory of the incident, and looking like he does, that it will not be hard, for the jury to believe that he is insane. After the jury comes out with the verdict, the judge looks michael in the eyes, takes a deep breath and says; “this is one of the most hideous, and unimaginable crimes i have ever seen in all my days” “, and death is too good for you”. “therefore, in complete confidence and conviction, i sentence you to a life of solitary confinement in the state psychiatric hospital” ”, with all the sick psychos you belong with” ”, to rot and live your life, with what you have done weighing on your conscious”. “may god have mercy on your soul”, and with a bang of the gavel it was set in stone; michael had murdered his family, and tried to kill himself. Michael became a zombie, and empty of every human emotion. Completely empty inside after a few weeks in his padded room with a straight jacket on, michael did not think things, could get much worse. However, michael had no idea, on how dark and twisted things were about to get, and how the reality he thought he knew, or what little piece of sanity he had left, was all truly an illusion.