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Originally Posted by BloodintheBay
Just completed my first short film, called Blood in the Bay. It was shot in Maryland, and I would love to know your opinion on it .. http://vimeo.com/9566808 |
OK. So I actually think that the direction is really good - How shots are framed, the editing, that sort of thing.
The voice over honestly drives me mad - It's heavy-handed and really gets in the way of the movie. Also, I really don't care about any of the characters, so I'm ambivalent as to whether or not they live or die.