I see what you mean. Good idea! Like you could end it with something like:
"They're right outside. I can hear them, their infernal huffing and clawing, on the other side of the door. I still have one bullet."
The end.
That is a good technique. That would totally mess with those of us who thought: "Hey, he's telling us the story. He's going to live." lol
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FROM GHOULIES AND GHOSTIES
AND LONG-LEGGED BEASTIES
AND THINGS THAT GO BUMP IN THE NIGHT,
GOOD LORD DELIVER TO US!
Old Scotch Invocation
-- adapted by Stingy Jack
Stingy's Horror DVD Collection
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