Question About Posting Screenplays

[HodderFan2004]

To Anyone Who Cares To Answer,

I have several screenplays that i've written (Jason XII, XII, XIV, Halloween 9, Poltergeist 4, and Freddy Vs. Jason II) and i would love to share them but i was wondering what the best forum section would be. I checked out the fiction area and it seemed kinda quiet. So where shall I put them if anyone wants to even read them that is.

HodderFan2004

[VampRocker]

Holy crap, you wrote the scripts for that many movies?! Damn!

[HodderFan2004]

VampRocker,

What can I say ?. I love writing and I love horror films.

KaneHodder2004

[HodderFan2004]

And I have no clue why i signed my name KaneHodder2004. Alright so I'm watching FT13TH PART 7 maybe that's it or maybe I need sleep.

HodderFan2004

[Haunted]

Holy shit!!! I haven't written that much...well...that I haven't scrapped. Are you going to make P4 really good? If you are, then I praise you.

[HodderFan2004]

Originally posted by Haunted
Holy shit!!! I haven't written that much...well...that I haven't scrapped. Are you going to make P4 really good? If you are, then I praise you.

I'm going to TRY and make it good. It's in it's first draft stage right now. Jason XII, XIII, and XIV are quite good and each takes things in interesting little directions as well as introduces a few Voorhees family members (Poppa Voorhees for example). Halloween 9 brings back Laurie Strode (stop looking at me like that) in a most odd fashion which leaves the character in a really bad way. I also forgot to mention my script for Scream 4. Yes i'm a busy little man.


HodderFan2004
(now with an avatar !)

[ds_spoon]

umm post it in this forum everyone reads it here

[LegionFilms]

Yea everyone reads stuff here but the "correct" forum would be Horror Fiction Post.

[HodderFan2004]

I guess that wouldn't be a bad idea. So ... here goes. My Jason XII script. Copyright 2004 by Arthur R. Phillips
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It was a dark and stormy night ... just kidding ... here goes
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FADE IN :

EXT. FIREPIT - NIGHT

We fade in close on a roaring camp fire at night. A group of
teens are gathered around the fire and there's plenty of drinks
and drugs going around.

CHUCK is the first to speak. He's a young, blonde "All
American" type of kid with a trust fund and looks that would
cause any girls panties to involuntarily drop to their ankles.

CHUCK
Bullshit, Jason Voorhees is fucking dead and
even if he were alive, which he's not, the
motherfuckers gotta be in his what sixties
?.

ALI is a modern goth-girl with the dark clothes, hair and
lipstick. She's puffing on a cigarette and attempting to look
angry.

ALI
What the fuck do you know ?

CHUCK
Hey i know that there's not some fucking
geriatric psycho running around the goddamn
woods with a machete

ALI
I notice you bought your father's hunting
rifle

CHUCK
For bears

ALI
(mocking)
Bears ?

CHUCK
(getting angry)
Yeah bears

JEROME is a young, African-American male with muscles, looks
and killer smile. He's dressed for sitting around a campfire at
night. His girlfriend APRIL is sitting, snuggled next to him.
She's a gorgeous African-American girl who's also bundled in
warm camping clothes.

JEROME
Why don't you two shut the fuck up ?

APRIL
Yeah c'mon guys we're supposed to be
enjoying ourselves out here

CHUCK
Hey i'm attempting to have an intelligent
conversation here guys

ALI
Oh Jesus

CHUCK
Listen Morticia

ALI
(getting up, angry)
Oh fuck you asshole

CHUCK
Oh and where the fuck do you think you're
going ?

ALI
Well i'm going where you're supposed to be
right now football boy, Amanda's all alone
back at the cabin unpacking bags, without
our help, and i don't like the idea of her
being alone

CHUCK
Do you actually have a brain ?, cause i've
known you for four years and i still don't
know the answer to that

ALI
Eat me

CHUCK
Eat yourself

ALI
What and make all men completely obsolete ?,
you can sit here all goddamn night and get
stoned if you want, some of us have work to
do

CHUCK
Up until you started with this Jason shit i
believe that's exactly what you were doing
as well

ALI
Yeah well i'm getting cold, and what makes
you so sure of yourself ?, what makes you so
confident, it can't be daddy's trust fund

CHUCK
Fuck you bitch

ALI
Hey all i'm saying is for, twenty years now
something has been walking around these
woods, if you ask me opening this camp was
just a bad idea

CHUCK
Why are you here then ?

ALI
I needed the money

CHUCK
So you don't mind there's a serial killer in
the woods as long as you can make a little
extra cash, well at least we know your
hearts in the right place

ALI
Fuck you

ALI walks off.

APRIL
I think i'm gonna head back too, tomorrow
the kiddies arrive, it's gonna be a long day
(to JEROME)
You coming ?

JEROME
No i think i'm gonna hang around here with
football boy

APRIL
(getting up)
Alrighty then, play nice boys, watch out for
Jason

CHUCK
Jason Voorhees can go fuck his dead mother

APRIL walks off as CHUCK and JEROME watch amused.

CHUCK
Now, i suppose you're going to tell me that
you believe this shit ?

JEROME
What shit ?

CHUCK
This Jason shit

JEROME
Well

CHUCK
(interrupting)
Oh for fuck sake

JEROME
Hey i didn't say anything did i ?, but i
suppose anything is fucking possible

CHUCK
Yeah well except for this, i mean, c'mon,
he's dead, don't you read the goddamn papers
?

JEROME
Yeah

CHUCK
And ?

JEROME
And i don't believe everything i read

CHUCK
Oh for fuck sake

JEROME
Why are so against believing, that, he might
be out there ?, i mean seriously, we don't
know everything

CHUCK
How about we change the subject ?

JEROME
Fine with me

CUT TO:

EXT. COUNSELORS CABIN - MOMENTS LATER

We have a wide and establishing shot of the counselors cabin.
It's two floors, several windows on the front, a small front
yard area and a path that leads down to the lake. The sounds of
nighttime nature are here and it's all very pleasant.

CUT TO:

INT. KITCHEN - MOMENTS LATER

AMANDA is using a carpet cutter to undo boxes of t-shirts with
the words "Camp Evergreen" emblazoned on them.
She cuts open a box, pulls out a pile of shirts and places them on the kitchen counter next to the box. The kitchen itself is a very modern design and it's obvious that the entire camp and it's cabin's have been given a modern update fitting to 2003.The kitchen, and the living room are separated only by tile in the kitchen and carpeting in the living area. A staircase heads upstairs to the bedrooms and bathroom. The living room contains a wicker chair, a sofa, a large entertainment center and a coffee table with various magazines on it. The kitchen has a large fridge, a large stove, a small table and chairs and a microwave.

ALI walks in and closes the door behind her. takes a drag of
her cigarette and leans on the door.

AMANDA looks up. She's a
simple girl with neat brunette hair, a loose pair of jeans, and
a simple blue sweater.

AMANDA
(to Ali)
Are you okay ?

ALI
(entering the kitchen)
Chuck is a complete fucking asshole

ALI hops on the counter.

AMANDA
(smiling)
You two never did get along

ALI
What do you see in him ?, he must great in
the sack

AMANDA
(embarrassed)
Well ...

ALI
Ah ha !, i knew it.

AMANDA
You know you're not supposed to smoke in the
cabins

ALI
Who's gonna tell ?

APRIL enters and throws her coat on the sofa. She heads for the
kitchen and leans against the fridge.

ALI
Hey April

APRIL
Chuck is an asshole, a complete fucking
asshole i don't know if i'm gonna be able to
cope with him all summer long i swear he's
gonna drive me nuts

ALI
We've already established that Chuck's an
asshole, lucky for you you're not the one
who's fucking him

AMANDA continues to unpack the box of shirts and when she gets
to the bottom of the box she stares into it slightly puzzled.

ALI
(to Amanda)
What ?

AMANDA reaches into the box and pulls out a smaller box
containing a Quija board.

ALI
What the fuck ?

APRIL
What is it ?

ALI
A Quija board

APRIL
(interested)
You're kidding

ALI takes the box from AMANDA's hands.

ALI
Wow, a Quija board hey, wanna see if it
works ?

AMANDA
Play with a Quija board at Camp Crystal Lake
?, uh i-

ALI
(interrupting)
Camp Evergreen

AMANDA
Yeah whatever

APRIL
(to Amanda)
You don't believe that Jason bullshit, i
mean you don't believe the fucker's still
alive somewhere out there ?

ALI
I believe it

APRIL
Yeah i saw the happy little debate you and
Chuck were having, but you know i mean
seriously Chuck does have a point, i mean
even if Jason were alive, he's like majorly
old

ALI
I'm sure a lot of people thought he was no
longer a threat

AMANDA
(absently)
Yeah and they're all dead

ALI hands the board back to AMANDA.

AMANDA(CONT.)
Maybe we should put it away.

ALI goes and takes the board from AMANDA.

ALI
How about you both get the sticks outta your
asses and we have a little fun

AMANDA
I resent that you think there's a stick up
my ass, this is just a little creepy, i
mean, c'mon, a Quija board ?, where the fuck
did it come from ?, what the fuck is it
doing here, especially here of all places

ALI
Who the fuck cares ?

AMANDA
I'm just saying it's a little strange

APRIL
Everything about this place is a little
strange don't you think ?, c'mon Amanda,
let's have a little fun

ALI
Well then, let's see if we can raise the
fucking dead

The girls share a smile and head into the living room.

CUT TO:

INT. LIVING ROOM - MOMENTS LATER

The girls are now sitting around the Quija board. AMANDA is
sitting on the sofa, and APRIL and ALI are sitting on the rug
across from the coffee table.

APRIL
Does it come with instructions ?

ALI
Oh for God sakes you Quija board virgins

APRIL
Oh you've done this before ?

ALI
Once

APRIL
When ?

ALI
When i was five

APRIL
Oh great so were working with a professional

ALI
Eat my ass April

APRIL
Maybe later, so okay Miss. Professional what
exactly do we do ?

ALI
Well first off you, and Amanda

APRIL
Why us ?

AMANDA
Yeah why us ?

ALI
Well i do know it's not suggested that it be
just one person, it has to be at least two,
and there's three of us so one of us has to
be the one who runs away when the first of
the living dead burst through the door

APRIL
Har-de-fucking-har

ALI
Would you two just put your fingers on the
message indicator so we can get to the part
where Jason storms into the cabin and cuts
our heads off please ?

APRIL
Fine, Amanda ?

AMANDA
Are you guys sure we should do this ?

ALI
What harm can it do ?

APRIL
Famous last words, okay then

-- TO BE CONTINUED after this portion gets a few responses/remarks/suggestions/daggers so on so forth --

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