how would this be for opening to freddy vs michael

[massacre man]

ok michael is at the asylum a nurse opens the door to check on michael as the nurse leaves she forgets to shut the door and lock it a boy runs in and hits michael on the back of the head michael holds him to the wall starts to lift him up by the throat then 3 nurses run in 2 hold michael down on the bed the 3r pokes him with a needle that makes him fall asleep (now i know this sounds like freddy vs jason) the man in black holds the knife and ses go get him he puts the glove on michaels hand michael sleep walks slashes the lock on the door then slashes a lock on a door down the hall then michael walks to the boy from earlier then stabs the boy in the face then michael falls down and the glove disappears in the background u can hear freddy laughing

what do u think? u got any improvements i could make?