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FangoFan
12-10-2003, 02:36 PM
Lace
A red satin gown dripping to the floor,
Her features caressed within
A golden flow of locks,
That rests upon her pretty head
She stands above her husband,
His body below, dead
French blade gripped tightly,
Crimson stained
Lace's husband has cheated,
But now he's defeated
bloodrayne
06-18-2004, 01:35 PM
Wow...These are some old threads
zwoti
06-20-2004, 09:48 AM
damn, though it was about blood & lace, very bloody 70's film
ShankS
06-20-2004, 03:30 PM
this a thread for poems?
bloodrayne
06-20-2004, 09:55 PM
It isn't SUPPOSED to be about poems...Those should go in the writing forum
ShankS
06-21-2004, 03:22 AM
yeah, so all the artistic peeps can display their work.
bloodrayne
06-21-2004, 12:02 PM
yup
ShankS
06-21-2004, 04:04 PM
I'm artistic, i should post there......
there once was a man called ned
he had a dog called ted
but once the dog knew he was called ted
he bit off his owners head.
zwoti
06-21-2004, 11:55 PM
Originally posted by ShankS
I'm artistic, i should post there......
there once was a man called ned
he had a dog called ted
but once the dog knew he was called ted
he bit off his owners head.
can't understand why you haven't been published :D
kpropain
06-22-2004, 12:47 AM
Old Macdonald sitting on a bench
Beating his meat with a monkey wrench
Missed his meat and hit his balls
Bled all over his overhauls
ShankS
06-22-2004, 02:20 AM
Originally posted by zwoti
can't understand why you haven't been published :D
my works being viewed at the publishing house.....waiting for a reply.
Originally posted by kpropain
Old Macdonald sitting on a bench
Beating his meat with a monkey wrench
Missed his meat and hit his balls
Bled all over his overhauls
thats poetry in motion :)
kpropain
06-22-2004, 12:56 PM
It sure is:D
ShankS
06-22-2004, 01:07 PM
gona think of some more.
zwoti
06-24-2004, 03:21 PM
Originally posted by ShankS
gona think of some more.
well? thought of any
ShankS
06-25-2004, 03:05 AM
not yet, it's hard graft.
zwoti
06-30-2004, 01:26 PM
Originally posted by ShankS
not yet, it's hard graft.
try working down' pit
ShankS
07-02-2004, 08:42 AM
got gas central heating now, no need for coal.
zwoti
07-08-2004, 11:24 PM
gone all posh eh
ShankS
07-09-2004, 01:03 AM
na loading coal into the boiler broke me back......gas is much lighter
zwoti
07-11-2004, 02:40 PM
Originally posted by ShankS
na loading coal into the boiler broke me back......gas is much lighter
just don't smoke
ShankS
07-12-2004, 12:56 AM
i dont